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She's Hot (Sven's challenge)

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 06-10-2000 06:07 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

She's Hot

Kiss me if you must.
Touch me with just the
right amount of lust.
If you like to bite
I don't care that's alright.
Go ahead and touch my face
and caress my hair.
Tenderly touch me everywhere.
You can even be a little rough
as long as your heart has
some love to share.
Give me everything you got.
The more the better
that's what I want.
Cause I can't help but love
a woman that knows she's hot.

Jameslee@June10,2000
For the Hot women
of Passions and the
Cool one's too.
© Copyright 2000 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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1 posted 06-10-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Damn James you are regular Phonzy LOL. Man did you ever turn the heat up in here.
NOw I know who the passion into poetry,

enjoyed this. you the man.

 ------------------------
"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

Faster- manic street preachers

I am an architect, they call me a butcher I am a pioneer, they call me primitive I am purity, they call me perverted
Holding you but I only miss these things when they leave

I am idiot drug hive, the virgin, the tattered and the torn Life is for the cold made warm and they are just lizards
Self-disgust is self-obsession honey and I do as I please A morality obedient, only to the cleansed repented

*I am stronger than Mensa, Miller and Mailer
I spat out Plath and Pinter I am all the things that you regret
A truth that washes that learnt how to spell

The first time you see yourself naked you cry Soft skin now acne, foul breath, so broken He loves me truly this mute solitude I'm draining I know I believe in othing but it is my nothing

Sleep can't hide the thoughts splitting through my mind Shadows aren't clean, false mirrors too many people awake If you stand up like a nail then you will be knocked down I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else * chorus
So damn easy to cave in, man kills everything (x4)
-----





Corinne
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2 posted 06-10-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Whew! You are the one that is hot, James, dear!

Corinne
Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 06-10-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

It's a little warm in here!!! Tasty little morsel you penned James, Thank you for sharing  
MagnoliaBlue
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4 posted 06-10-2000 07:28 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

Hot Damn, James...

Kissing, biting, caressing, loving,

touching...and sharing!

You got it all in there in a short poem...I

love every word.

Very HOT!!!

Great job!!!  


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Kit McCallum
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5 posted 06-10-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Phew!  I'm havin' to take too many cold showers around here lately!     Well done James!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Rosebud1229
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6 posted 06-10-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

I agree that this poem is very hot Whew!!
better call 911 because i'm on fire.. lol
Tennessee Angel
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7 posted 06-10-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for Tennessee Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tennessee Angel

Wow!  Really enjoyed this one!  Romance and pure lust rolled into one.  Keep 'em comin'!!

 "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca
poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 06-10-2000 11:19 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

hehehe  I see you're tiptoeing close to the edge of Open near Adult here!  Any more steam rising from this one, and PdV would probably have to move it there!  LOL  This sir, is HOT!  Very nice piece of steam, er....poetry!  
First__Knight
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9 posted 06-10-2000 11:43 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Your go James......HEHEHE

 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.

Janet Marie
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10 posted 06-11-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

OOOH its so nicey to see sweetbabyjames SPICY
looooove this one
you matchstick you  
later-sin-gator lol
jm

 And it's good that I'm not angry,
I just need to get over,
I'm not angry, anymore
Cry when you cry,
run when you run,
love when you love,
represent the ashes
that you leave behind
~MB20~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


SpitFire
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11 posted 06-11-2000 12:30 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~WooHoo James!!!  Hehe...great little piece here.  A treat to read...you little devil you.  . *Peace.
tracie66
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12 posted 06-11-2000 01:05 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Whoa!!! James this is hot, very hot.
Oh I liked this very much especially the part about biting I like to do that (god I'm giving to much away here)...LOL
Oh I think you win..way to go James

Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


JamesMichael
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13 posted 06-11-2000 09:04 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Brian, First_Knight and all you wonderful Hot and Lovely women of Passions.   You are the Hottest!!!!
Oh I almost forgot..tracie I love the biting part...my heart beats a little faster in those moments...do hickey's count as biting?  James
tracie66
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14 posted 06-11-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Well James I wasn't thinking about hickey's at the time more along the lines of lets say tender "love nips" Oh boy here it goes again my temperature rising...sorry gotta go  
TC~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




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SEA
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15 posted 06-12-2000 09:12 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

James~ gotta love this! Good grief it's hot in here!   -SEA

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Corazon
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16 posted 06-12-2000 10:01 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

this is great!...first time I heard about a challenge for "hot passionate women" but hey...why not?
not really great writing  
Elizabeth
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17 posted 06-12-2000 11:15 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Very hot, James!

Elizabeth


 I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!


JamesMichael
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18 posted 06-12-2000 05:29 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you tracie, Sea, Corazon, and Elizabeth...I'm glad you enjoyed.
Actually tracie hickies are just a little diversion..I enjoy lip to lip kissing the best.  More than I could say...James
JulieAnn
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19 posted 06-12-2000 05:47 PM       View Profile for JulieAnn   Email JulieAnn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JulieAnn

So steamy.....it steamed my computer screen...it will be tuff for all those men in here to beat this one!! Great work!!!  
amazon_lover
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20 posted 06-12-2000 05:54 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

The poem was hot...your girl is hot too.

A_L
Antonio
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21 posted 06-12-2000 05:59 PM       View Profile for Antonio   Email Antonio   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Antonio


I know exactly what your writing about...It is hard to say no when you dont want to...

-Antonio-

 Itīs hard to live, when you donīt want to die....
Itīs hard to smile, when the sun doesnīt shine...
Sven
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22 posted 06-13-2000 01:30 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

James,
      this was really good. . . short and sweet. . . and flirting with the edge. . .

----------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

JamesMichael
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23 posted 06-13-2000 02:13 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Julie, Amazon, Antonio, and Sven for your wonderful comments...James
Nate Dogg
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24 posted 06-13-2000 05:04 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

This poem is hot and very agressively expressed. A very good piece!

 Nathan
 
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