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Colors Of Love
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Colors Of Love |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Love possesses many different hues From a bright red to deep blues Feelings dictate the changing shades Time may cause the colors to fade Love usually starts out as pink When one prepares to drink For the first time from this cup With the curiosity of a pup Love can turn the brightest red When you can't keep that someone out of your head Just a look can make you blush As your blood flows with a rush Love can take on a pigment of passion I imagine it to be purple in fashion It burns with the intensity of a fire Only one way to quench those desires Love no longer aflame carries a blue tint Because on your heart is its print The mark of a feeling so sweet You were almost burned by the heat Love has many other tones One is always with you even when you're alone Look around and you will see All the splendid colors that love can be Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
LW a wonderful poem very coulourful. I always wondered what colour love was. Love has many other tones One is always with you even when you're alone Look around and you will see All the splendid colors that love can be ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. Faster- manic street preachers I am an architect, they call me a butcher I am a pioneer, they call me primitive I am purity, they call me perverted Holding you but I only miss these things when they leave I am idiot drug hive, the virgin, the tattered and the torn Life is for the cold made warm and they are just lizards Self-disgust is self-obsession honey and I do as I please A morality obedient, only to the cleansed repented *I am stronger than Mensa, Miller and Mailer I spat out Plath and Pinter I am all the things that you regret A truth that washes that learnt how to spell The first time you see yourself naked you cry Soft skin now acne, foul breath, so broken He loves me truly this mute solitude I'm draining I know I believe in othing but it is my nothing Sleep can't hide the thoughts splitting through my mind Shadows aren't clean, false mirrors too many people awake If you stand up like a nail then you will be knocked down I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else * chorus So damn easy to cave in, man kills everything (x4) ----- |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ I truly enjoyed the look at your 'Colors Of Love' ... How close our colors of thought run in relation to this subject. Thought you might like to see one I posted before you joined our family of friends .... hope you enjoy it. /pip/Forum31/HTML/000293.html Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful imagery Lone Wolf ... a beautiful description of love! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
WOW Lone Wolf, your writing just keeps getting better and better  I know you challenged me to write on this subject, however I certainly could never have done it as well as you have All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is beautiful L.W. it reminds me of a scene in the movie "Mask" when he's showing the blind girl what color things are....touched my heart just like this does. Thank you so much for sharing your colors with us! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Wolf, very sweet this one .. the color purple is in fashion!  Coco |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Lone Wolf~ A wonderful description of love!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
LW, beautiful! you've painted a wonderful description of love. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Brian....Thank you and love can be whatever color you'd like. Marge....Wow! No idea you'd written that. Can I read your mind or vice versa?? We are in trouble if that is true!! LOL....great poem and wonderful presentation!!! Kit....Thank you......just what I imagine it to be!!! Jeffrey....haha, the challenge still stands!! See what you can do. I am sure you'll have a different take on it!! Thanks!! B.D.C....Glad you liked it. Always happy to touch someone's heart with my writing. What a compliment my friend!! Coco....Purple is my favorite!!! Lorraine....Thank you!! DA....Thanks and that is just how I see it!! |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Very well written! You illustrate all the shades of love beautifully! "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~LW oh *sigh* this was beautiful. it reminded me sorta of that celine dion song "colour of my love." at least it fit with the title. beautiful way of describing love, you did it so tenderly. lovely just lovely! amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Very very lovely, although I've always seen Blue as a wonderfully positive color. Kind of interesting thinking of it as something different. Very creative piece my dear! |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh this has been laid down with the perfection of art.....With many colors... It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love the way you wove these colors together Lone Wolf, way to go!! Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~LW,...Like we talked about in ICQ,...so many aspects. A million ...remember? You've obviously gotten a feel for these and write of it with such beautiful words...so from the heart. So you. Thank you for sharing this. Take care. *Peace pal. . |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Lone Wolf- I love the way you put everything into a visual context. Feelings have colours and vice-versa. You captured them very well and put them together into a fine piece. Well done! Trew. I have been to see the world. Tasted life at every turn. And all the time your face came back to haunt me. -Chris DeBurgh |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful poem Lone Wolf. The colors of love is a great way to express your feelings. Cleverly done. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
T.A....Thank you, I try! Amy....very happy to see you enjoyed it. I know you can relate to these colors my friend. Poet Femme....Thanks, hmmm.....blue as positive. I like that. Nice viewpoint! First_Night...Perfection...wow. Thank you!! Irish Rose....They just seem to fit that way. Glad you liked it. Spit Fire....Yes! A million aspects. You are welcome for sharing. Thank you for the kind words my friend. Trew....Thanks!! I think we overlook the visual context a lot when we write. So I am trying to see things differently. I am happy you liked it and thanks for reading. Ethome....Thanks....just came to me one day. |
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