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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-06-10 03:21 PM




~*FaerieTale*~
~*Marge Tindal*~

With auburn tresses spun in curl
dances a faeried green-eyed girl
Lazied daisies hold her fair
this girl of the auburn hair

Spinning tales of merriment
spreading love so Heaven sent
Laughter plays from deep within
Tiptoeing lightly about the glen

Ducking in and out with delight
this auburn-haired faerie sprite
Wings a'flutter whispers sighs
caught in a moment of surprise

Should you venture into the glen
you'll surely catch this faeried friend
As you sit in the quietude of night
upon your shoulder she will light

Whispering faerie of auburned tress
holds your heart in sweet caress
Feeling like you've just met fate
What a difference faeries make


* For Corinne ... for her inspiration ! *
*For believing in me*



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Munda
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1 posted 2000-06-10 03:30 PM


A true Fearie Tale Marge. Beautiful !  
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2 posted 2000-06-10 03:38 PM


A magical poem sprinkled with faerie dust.
wonderful.

Is the cute faerie hoovering on the screen seeing anyone? I don't care if she she is only 8 inchs tall.
lol

 ------------------------
"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Outside open mouthed crowds Pass each other as if they're drugged
Down pale corridors of routine Where life falls unatoned "

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.




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3 posted 2000-06-10 03:39 PM


A beautifully told tale, Marge!

Elizabeth


 I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



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4 posted 2000-06-10 04:30 PM


Munda~
Glad you liked it.

Brian~
The Faeries are always there !
Thanks for liking.

Elizabeth~
Thank you, hon.

~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2000-06-10 04:37 PM


Marge -- This is fantastic!  Brings back girlhood dreams of Tinkerbell and all the lovely things that only a child-like heart can dream up.  Thanks for a lovely, enchanting read!

 "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca

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6 posted 2000-06-10 05:43 PM


I loved the flow in this Marge, and what a wonderful "fairy" tale ... I adored it! Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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7 posted 2000-06-10 05:48 PM


You never stop amazing me Marge...

Really loved this one, It had an old Irish ring to it I think. The rythm is nice, and your choice of words lifts it even higher...

Waiting for the next one allready...

-nando-


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TennesseeAngel~
Ahhhhhhh !  There is magic in the heart of a child -
and grownups who still believe.
Thanking you for your sweet response.

Kit~
We flit amongst the faeries
as delightful thoughts take wing.
Thank you for your always kind replies.

Nando~
Ah, yes !  
The Irish touch of faerie kiss,
softened on the wings of bliss.

I hope I can deliver more to please you.
Thank you for the response.
~*Marge*~




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9 posted 2000-06-10 06:15 PM


Wow!!
Fragile, graceful and delicately beautiful!!

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10 posted 2000-06-10 06:32 PM


Marge,

How do you do it???????

Man,err, woman   this is amazing

 All my love,
Jeffrey

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but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep


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11 posted 2000-06-10 06:55 PM


Wow, Marge!!!

I am so - well, speechless!  So very, very sweet of you, you really made my day, dear lady!  What a lovely Irish Tale!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Corinne


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12 posted 2000-06-10 07:01 PM


  What lovely sentiments!  You pen the love for another better than anyone else Marge, this is beautiful!! Thank you for sharing this*~

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13 posted 2000-06-10 07:58 PM


Fairy, fairy good, Marge!!! A wee bit o de Irish in you on display here  
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14 posted 2000-06-10 08:35 PM



Marge~

Wonderful...Wonderful...I love it!!

~Lorraine

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur


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15 posted 2000-06-10 08:47 PM


So delicate, so sweet, so beautiful. Excellent Marge! as always  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



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16 posted 2000-06-10 08:59 PM


Insect~
I'm glad it 'WOW'-ed you.  Thank you.

Jeffrey~
I reckon the Faerie Muse lit on my shoulder
and whispered it in my ear.  Glad you enjoyed.

Corinne~
My goodness !  I thank YOU for the sheer
inspiration of this piece.

ButterfliesDC~
Awwww !  What a lovely thing to say.  
I just let my heart speak.
You can thank Corinne for the inspiration
for this one.

Balladeer~
Ah !  It is so !

Lorraine~
Thank you so much.

DarkAngel~
The Faerie thanks you, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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17 posted 2000-06-10 09:18 PM


Yes, I know a faerie like that, she sits on the end of my pen, while I write...
lol......

Great poem....Margie

Parker

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Parker~
Perhaps we know the same Faerie ?
Here's *winking* at you !
~*Marge*~


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19 posted 2000-06-11 03:17 AM


This is lovely, Marge!! Only you could write this gracefully.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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20 posted 2000-06-11 09:46 AM


Good morning Marge,

This is perfect, I just LOVE it. You touched my heart with this one because I love fairy's thank you so much for sharing this my friend.

Love, Cerenity

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21 posted 2000-06-11 11:21 AM


~Awww Marge,....I love this. I'm going to have to get me one of these fairies you speak of.  So well done,...I'm telling you, your work should be in a book 'Mam...I mean it.  . Take care, and thank you for the soft and beautiful poem this morning.
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22 posted 2000-06-11 11:50 AM


Lil' Lizzie~
Awww !  What a sweetie you are !
Thank you, my little 'mentee' and friend.

Cerenity~
I would have figured you for a 'Faerie' person ... from your gentle ways !
Glad you enjoyed.

SpitFire~
What a nice compliment to make my day.
Dispatching, POST HASTE ... one Faerie.
~*Marge*~


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23 posted 2000-06-11 11:54 AM


Marge, what a cutey cute little Faerie Tale.....I'd love to read more of these !!


Regards, shilpi

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Shilpi~
Thank you ... and so would I !  
I'll have to await the return of the
Faerie Muse !
~*Marge~


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25 posted 2000-06-12 06:00 AM


Oh Marge
I just love fairy's and if I could say what I was to come back as in another life I would definately come back as a fairy.
So cute, mystical, magical and mischievous
Lovely as usual Marge
A big smile from me  
Luv Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



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26 posted 2000-06-12 06:59 AM


Tracie~
Thanks, hon ... for the endearing thought
of you as a Faerie.  
I'm really pleased that you found joy in this little poem.
Thanks for the e-mail.
Keep the smile.
Love you~
~*Marge*~


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27 posted 2000-06-24 09:35 PM


Marge,

you are too modest! i am plenty sure i will like what i can find

A beauty as always...(whining like a little kid)Life isn't fair...why the faerie muse speaks to her and NOT to me?

anyway, here's hoping the faerie muse speaks to you soon....

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28 posted 2000-06-24 10:59 PM


Possesed of beauty
your words speak clear
Once again ,oh Marge , we hear !
Doc

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I gotta say this is now one of my favorites...lets see that makes the number way up there in the...gosh..thinking here...well lots.  Wonderful poem!!
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30 posted 2000-06-25 12:32 PM


such imagination here...I loved it.... as usual Great writing......

Julie :)



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Ah, such light and lovely beauty Marge...this is gorgeous work indeed.  

*Krista Knutson*

"Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~


"We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~

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32 posted 2000-06-26 01:44 AM


Kaile~
Funny you are ... love it.
I'm listening for when she speaks again.

Dr.Moose~
Thank you so much for your little rhyme.

Martie~
You're a kick !  I love you.

JulieAnn~
I appreciate your thoughts.

Krista~
I am so glad that you enjoyed it.
I had fun writing it.
~*Marge*~


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33 posted 2000-06-26 02:02 AM


Marge, this was great!  I really enjoyed this one.  
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Eloise~
Thank you, dear.
It was a fun one to write.
~*Marge*~


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35 posted 2000-06-26 09:32 PM


Yes, what a difference, indeed! This is a delightful tale of whimsy, Miss Marge!

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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36 posted 2000-06-27 06:47 AM


Claire~
I'm glad you like this little charmer.
Have I told you how WONDERFUL it is
to have you back in here sharing your
beautiful poetry.
See ... I do believe in Faeries ! !
~*Marge*~


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37 posted 2000-06-27 07:03 AM


WOW,
Where was I when all this was happening ???

real glad that I could read this...

Lovely, lovely work, Marge...

regards, sudhir.

Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne

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38 posted 2000-06-27 11:13 PM


Ah, Sudhir~
Ye may have been asleep in the garden
where the Faeries play.  
They can sprinkle your eyelids with magical Faerie dust ... awaken now and smile !
Thank you, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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