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Sven
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0 posted 2000-06-10 01:23 PM


Well, hearken all ye people, and get your hands to clappin'
Give ear to my call, and listen to my rappin'
For I'm about to tell ya 'bout some ladies of fashion
Nothin' like 'em on Earth, those Women of Passions

I was just a simple man who was good with words
Till someone told me 'bout this place I'd never heard
So I hooked up my modem and fired up my browser
And when I got to that place, my heart went "WOWSER!"

There they were on my screen from wall to wall
How could I not yield to their gentle siren's call?
They stole my heart with their work, and wooed me with their words
And sang for me the sweetest songs I've ever heard

BREAK IT DOWN!!!!!!  (ROLL CALL!!!)

(*background chorus--The Knights)

PASSIONS!!! PASSIONS!!!
WOMEN OF PASSIONS!!
PASSIONS!!! PASSIONS!!!
WOMEN OF PASSIONS!!

(*background continues over the following*)

There's PoetdeVine and PoetfemmeFatale
And Janet Marie, she's my kinda gal!
Marina, Devina, and Marge Tindal too
But there'll never be another like Magnolia Blue
Aimster and Kit and my good friend Irie
Are here along with Tracie, to keep things cheery
Dark Angel and Isis, and let's not forget Severn
They always make me feel like I'm in seventh heaven.

Lone Wolf and Alwye, who else did we miss?
There are just too many to keep them in a list!
Hey Munda, X-Angel and you too Miss Nan
We just love you ladies, we're your biggest fans!
CocoBaci, Skyfyre, and Lorraine Nisbet
You all are about as good as it's going to get!
Butterflies Don't Cry and A Romantic Heart
Just like the others on this list, you're all sweet and smart!!

(*background chorus fades*)

So the next time you need to put a smile on your face
Come on down to Passions, it's a really rockin' kinda place!
The women that are here will make you feel alright
To get to know them all is truly a delight!

The women here are kind, they're all sweet and smart
And if you're not careful, they may steal your heart
These women of Passions know just what to say
They're poets, you know it, each and every day!

So ladies, we thank you for filling our lives with song
Were it not for you our lives would be far too long
Keep singing with your voices loud and crystal clear
We'll take your words to our hearts and hold them very dear


PEACE OUT!!!!

WORD!!!

ROFL!!!

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< !signature-->

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl





[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-10-2000).]

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brian madden
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1 posted 2000-06-10 01:31 PM


YES THEY STOLE MY HEART AS WELL. AW THESE WOMEN, THEYLURE YOU IN WITH PRAISE AND KIND WORDS BUT I KNOW THEY ARE UP TO SOMETHING...AS THEY SAY THOUGH NEVER MESS WITH A POETESS...SO RESPECT TO THE WOMEN OF PASSION...THIS HAS BEEN THE WONDEROUS AND TOO TALENTED MC SVEN THE COOL AND THE FUNKY POETRY CREW, ON THE SCREEN.
SVEN THE MAN.



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Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Outside open mouthed crowds Pass each other as if they're drugged
Down pale corridors of routine Where life falls unatoned "

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.




Dawn Eclipse
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2 posted 2000-06-10 02:15 PM


Sven~

That was a great poem!  I enjoyed the rap style.  I loved this one.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*

Munda
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3 posted 2000-06-10 03:19 PM


Hey man ! What else can I say but WOWSER ! COOL ! YEAH ! GREAT ! LOVE IT !  
Elizabeth
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4 posted 2000-06-10 03:41 PM




Elizabeth


 I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



X Angel
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5 posted 2000-06-10 03:50 PM


Awwww I'm flattered to be mentioned in yer lil rap! Thanks!
Great poem, what fun!
*kudos!*
~Heather

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-06-10 03:55 PM


Sven~
What delight is your rap ...
Ladies hearts you do ZAP !
You've talent galore ...
one we've come to adore !
Rap on with glee ...
we'll listen to thee,
our hearts filled
with melodic rhapsody !
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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CocoBaci
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7 posted 2000-06-10 04:15 PM


Sven, I see you've dabbled into the lyic writing also (teehee) well my friend this 'Rap' you've shared is indeed a treat!
Bye4now
Coco  

Irish Rose
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8 posted 2000-06-10 04:55 PM




 Kathleen

"How do I love thee? Let
me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning


Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2000-06-10 05:40 PM


You're just too darn sweet Sven ... wonderful rap!  Loved it!       

Best wishes,
/Kit

nando
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10 posted 2000-06-10 05:42 PM


Right on brother...

Ice-cold, no mistakes...

-nando-


 Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday...

Marina
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11 posted 2000-06-10 06:55 PM


Music to my ears!  Yes, tis' true we have "Rapped" all of you around are little  fingers and have put you under our spell. But that is just our magic way of saying Thank you to all of you men.  

Marina

Butterflies_dont_cry
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12 posted 2000-06-10 07:08 PM


ROFL.........Oh my I never though I would see the word "Rap" and the name "Sven" together....wonder of wonders....lol this is wayyy to funny!
MagnoliaBlue
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13 posted 2000-06-10 07:16 PM


WOWSER SVEN!!!

I don't think there is any type of writing

that you can't do, Sir Sven.

I am amazed!!

Here's a pat on the back, a high-five and a

big ole hug for CONGRATS on a poem well

done.  

I really love this rap...thanks for the

smiles!


MagnoliaBlue


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You will love it!

"A poem is just an expression of my life and heart."*CJB*

~*My Skipper Jim,
I love you!
Your Lady June*~

Isis
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14 posted 2000-06-10 07:41 PM


Great work you rapper you!!!!  
Thanks for the mention too!!  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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15 posted 2000-06-10 08:05 PM


er, lithium supply getting a little low, Sven? ROFL! Great job on this one! Somehow, looking at your pic and imagining you rappin' is not an easy task but....hey, still waters run deep, they say, and this shows you can rap with the best of them. Very clever sticking all the girls' names in there, appealing to their vanity. Sly devil, you are!!!  
Lorraine Nisbet
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16 posted 2000-06-10 09:19 PM



Sven~

What great fun!  I love it!!  Can't get any cooler than you!!  Thanks for the mention.

~Lorraine            

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur


devina
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17 posted 2000-06-10 09:32 PM


I'm glad I popped in when I did dearest...else I would have missed this!!! Too Cute Sven...you know the rest!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


Tennessee Angel
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18 posted 2000-06-10 09:39 PM


This was truly a very fun read.
It's a good thing that fame I don't need.
For I looked and looked but it wasn't to be.
No mention at all for the poet from Tennessee.
___________________________

Other than that, I loved it Sven!!  

 "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca

Tara Simms
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19 posted 2000-06-10 09:42 PM


Sven, you are so funny! Loved the "break it down" part with The Knights doing the chorus.

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley



poetFemmeFatale
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20 posted 2000-06-10 11:29 PM


Well, I'm just blushing with pride to be # 2 on your list!     And so funny to hear you say WOWSER...my 3 year old loves Inspector Gadget Movie, and that's the only darn place I've heard the term!  hehehe  Can't stand the movie btw!  LOL  Anyways, you better duck from all the ladies you DIDN'T mention, I see a few frowns in here!     And I'm still laughing at Brian Madden's reply, saying he wonders just what we're up to, when we're nice to him!  ROFL  This ROCKS Sven!
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21 posted 2000-06-10 11:53 PM


Simply AWESOME SVEN.....you have out done yourself my man  

 It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone.


SpitFire
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22 posted 2000-06-11 12:37 PM


~Sven,...so cool. You are truly talented in expressing yourelf. So well done..so fun to read. Take care. *Peace.
tracie66
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23 posted 2000-06-11 12:49 PM


You are so cool
And I like your
rappin' style

your little
rappin' poem
put a smile
on my dial  

love to you Sven
you've made us gals
Swoon
Hope to see more
From you in
Passions real soon

Thanks for the mention
you cool rappin' dude you  


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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24 posted 2000-06-11 12:55 PM


ROTFL!   CUTE!! TOO CUTE! *hugs and kisses*


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"



Aimster
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25 posted 2000-06-11 02:59 AM


sven
your romantic and a rapper wow is there anything u can't do? lol. this was great. thanks for the mention too.  
take care hon.
amy

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




PanDol
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26 posted 2000-06-13 02:10 AM


Clap Clap Clap....
This is great Sven!
Keep it up!
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 ~PanDol

[This message has been edited by PanDol (edited 06-13-2000).]

Irie
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Washington State
27 posted 2000-06-13 02:17 AM


Oops! ROFL!!! Sven, I know you know what I'm laughing at!  

Ok, now this is fantastic! How do you keep coming up
with this stuff Sven? You never cease to amaze me my friend!
I'm flattered that you've mentioned me in your little ditty!  
Good friends indeed! Hugs from me to you!  
What's next Mister? Hmmm?


 ~Sheri

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