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Eternity's Slow Caress
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Eternity's Slow Caress |
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Willy Honker New Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 9 |
Eternity's Slow Caress Giddy up horsey were gonna ride gonna find us a dame to romance, she'll love us just fine you and I as we carry her to sites unknown. We'll dazzle her lustrous intellect, enlighten her with our style to date, dine her on elegance of pure delight, gather the reins of passion and ride. She's not far my pal just over yonder we'll gallop her away within a blink once I'm on my knees to her pleading, honoring the blessed ground she walks. Take my hand dear lady, follow paradise your every wish I vow to carry complete, the rising tides cannot succumb my desires ride with me through eternity's slow caress. |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Oh my goodness dear Willy, I did not know you could write such wonderful poetry ! Well done my friend ! |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Willy... This one line just did it for me.... "ride with me through eternity's slow caress." Wow, so sweet. Thanks for the great read!! MagnoliaBlue Pay a visit to: http://cyberageadventures.com You will love it! "A poem is just an expression of my life and heart."*CJB* ~*My Skipper Jim, I love you! Your Lady June*~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yes, that last line really wraps it up nicely! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'll have to echo the ladies above Willy ... this poem is lovely, and your title and last line are superb! Well done. Best wishes, /Kit |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Willy... Nice reading this was. Liked the old-fashion way in which it was written. You are obvoiusly a romantic person, så keep it up...The world needs us  -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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Willy Honker New Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 9 |
Juliet, I thank you very kindly Magnolia, Thank you glad you could enjoy it Elizabeth, Thank you Kit, Thank you much nando,Thanks buddy |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Love this type of old fashioned romantic poetry ! |
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