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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
This is a hard way to live, Not a game to be played. It's the way we were born, Not a choice tht we made. People can be hateful, Disown you or pick a fight. With all this predjudice, Who'd want that kind of life. We do what we have to do, Trying to get along. All the time wonder, Why they find it so wrong. Love comes at a price, And for us it is higher. Just gives me a reason, To hold you much tighter. So forget what they say. Put it out of your mind. Our love's more important, We are two of a kind. (I hate that line...but can't think of anything to change it to) I can't really think of a title, I just call it Love '00 because it wasn't until the begining of 2000 when I finally admitted to my feelings to myself. If you can't figure the poem out, email me, catch me on icq, or just leave a message here and I can explain it more. [This message has been edited by Wicced_Witch (edited 01-09-2001).] |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I know how it feels and the title is interesting. Keep it like that, it tells a story in itself. Nice one here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Hey, good poem. I like the title too. Don't let others get in the way of your emotions. It's sad that some ppl are that closed minded these days to think ANY relation ship is taboo, or wrong. Best of luck to ya Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
This is great, the title once you said why it was significant, I think fits well and the last line, I think it is great too... Good job!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Wicced_Witch: A good poem. Its good that you have admitted to yourself your true feelings. When you keep everything locked away, it eats at you. A nicely presented poem.  ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
Just wanted to say thanx to all of you. Jason...I have to agree that it's sad how close minded people can be. I live in a small town, so it gets really bad here. I have decided to forget what people think, because I don't want to be like them. I can just be me, but they all look like they are clones of eachother. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like the way this is written. The poem is done very well, it's so good. The title works great in my opinion "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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