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Allan Riverwood
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0 posted 2001-01-09 08:49 PM


(Just did one in my head... hope you don't get mad, man.  ^_^)

Hardly ever posts
replies to all that he sees
call him Lakewalker

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1 posted 2001-01-09 09:57 PM


Haha I liked it. Very good allan.......you don't know how right you are about him.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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2 posted 2001-01-10 01:35 AM


HAHA
True... So True
This actually started a huge TP/Snowball/water fight/party... er yeah... or something like that.  You should have been here... But yes, Lake should post more poems, because him poems really are quite good.
Jason

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I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
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DragonFang
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3 posted 2001-01-10 02:24 AM


Heh, nice Haiku ~_~ though, I don't think he's the only one who should post more (hasn't been around since thanksgiving) ~_~.

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

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4 posted 2001-01-10 03:36 AM


Allan: Very good. Brought a smile to my face.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry


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5 posted 2001-01-10 04:53 AM


Great work...

Just managed to squeeze that out while laughing about the memories...  

You are right on the mark though allan!!

Love Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

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6 posted 2001-01-10 12:33 PM


Arrrrrrrgh!  Why do you people make me share???  Maybe I'll post some things in Teen Poetry #4 soon, but no promises   I'm not mad, I'm used to people telling me to post more, for some reason I just don't like to.   Is that a crime ??

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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7 posted 2001-01-10 01:30 PM


yep

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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8 posted 2001-01-10 05:16 PM


*nods*

good one allan
~JDR

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9 posted 2001-01-10 05:22 PM


Don't take this too seriously, Lake!  I'm only teasing a little.  
Don't ever change to satisfy anybody but yourself.  This is my thought of the day.

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10 posted 2001-01-10 07:48 PM


Yeah, I know it wasn't meant to be too serious.  A lot of people tease me, I'm use to it   Dopey, you're not the poetry police are you?  *Lakewalker slips out of the room hoping he wasn't noticed*

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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