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Stephanya
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~

0 posted 2001-01-09 01:56 AM

Just between me and you
Under each crystal clear star
Seeing through our own lonely view
There's always the place where our hearts are
Images of our faces may seem few
Never again though shall home seem so far

I Love + Miss You J-U-S-T-I-N...

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

..

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-01-09 05:01 AM

Stephanya: This is a good poem. So close to your heart.

Keep up the good work.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-09 12:53 PM

Wonderful poem. Expression at it's best!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2001-01-09 02:24 PM

Very good job on this!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-01-09 03:20 PM

One more point for the great love poet, Stephania! I'm learning a lot from you. You are an excellent poet, namely in your ability to express your deep passion within your poems, and keep them to a reasonably short length.
Keep up the good work.

Stephanya
Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~

5 posted 2001-01-09 04:19 PM

*^*^*bump*^*^*

ps>thanks for the responses

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

..

Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

6 posted 2001-01-09 04:43 PM

deep thought in this one, good work

*dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

7 posted 2001-01-09 04:53 PM

this is a great poem.
It's short but i like it,
it conveys the emotion well

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