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hopeful
Junior Member

since 2000-04-19

Posts 27

0 posted 2001-01-08 07:46 PM

Why do I see more then there is to you
When I look into your eyes I see love
When I listen to your words I hear tenderness
When I hear your voice I hear carefulness
But when I look at you I see a player

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-01-08 08:11 PM

This was a poem expressed well. This is so true. A lot of people are like this....Players.....bad bad bad. Watch yourself....you don't want to get hurt.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

2 posted 2001-01-08 09:57 PM

a guy who can't commit is afraid of getting a zit, in other words either he is really afraid of getting hurt himself that he might not be good enough for a girl so he keeps his options open....or he is just a jerk who only thinks about sex...most are the latter...anyways nice short sweet and to the point poem.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-01-09 01:01 AM

Players...
Nice poem topic. Look forward to reading more of yours, hopeful.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2001-01-09 02:14 PM

This poem is short but written very well, nice job on it!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-01-12 09:51 AM

It was short and to the point which is very refreshing. Players suck is all i can say. Im really sorry that you got involved with one and got hurt. Great poem tho

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

6 posted 2001-01-12 10:17 PM

Those damn players... GRRR... where do guys think they can get off doing crap like that to girls, huh? HUH? *L* Great poem

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