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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Through the mirror of dought and remorse I see not my life but one others course I supervene, the path he does take. and aloofly observing not to make a mistake. I contemplate where he’s conducted and conceivably wishes him to be And then unable to conceive what it demanded me to see. I deviated away like many are prone to do. I am sorry for what i’ve done. Subsequently it was you |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
... once again, you remind me of somebody that I know... A great poem, as are all of yours to date. The situation you describe seems to be difficult for you. I hope you pull through. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I really liked this poem a lot. Wonderful job on it. I hope to read many more of your poems. GOod luck on getting through the situation.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job of writing this one, I am also lookoing forward to seeing more. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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