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Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

0 posted 2001-01-08 06:03 PM

When I saw her blood flow,
I wondered how somone could know.
Shoot to kill not to thrill,
Pray that its my blood to spill.
Night and day,
On a bed of nails I lay.
Walking over burning coals,
Shot down and burned all my goals.
Sound of a gun ripping thru the midnight air,
Cold murder and only one who does care.
Ripping up lives with the furry of a gunshot,
Leaving them bloody looking like a suspot.
Should I help or help destroy,
The outter me is just my decoy.
Inside my heart dies,
Longing for Heaven's skies.
Wanting to be loved,
Everytime I get shoved.
A lonely young man that can barely stand,
When will someone lend me a helping hand?
Get me back on me feet so I can reclaim my place.
Look death face to face.
Show it no fear or mercy,
Just another dumb contreversy.
This is why I do what I do,
Knowing theres a Dark Angel Haunting You...

*dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-01-08 08:00 PM

Another powerful poem here by you. Hope things start to get better in your mind.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

2 posted 2001-01-08 08:55 PM

Great poem, I hope things get better for you though it does seem to be a good source of inspiration for you.

"God doesn't do anything for a reason, he rearranges lives while he's sneazin" -Me

Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

3 posted 2001-01-08 09:05 PM

i wouldnt say good but i write whats on my mind and thats always on my mind, kinda hard letting go of somthin you coulda prevented to begin with

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2001-01-09 01:49 PM

This poem is written well, nice job on it.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-01-12 09:46 AM

Extremely powerful piece, nice job

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