»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #3
»
Love calls
| Teen Poetry #3 |
|
Love calls |
|
|
Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas 
|
As the phone rings, I pray to God that it is you. I pick the phone up, putting it to my ear, My heart is racing. Then I hear your sweet voice, The dull shadow that hung over me disappears…. As we talk u make me laugh, I am so glad we are together, The butterflies dance happily in my stomach, As I say good bye, to reply with “I love you”, My heart melts, For I know you would never hurt me, You hang up and I began to miss you. Many nights I though about you, Wondering if you could ever love me, Imaging how it would feel to have you arms wrapped around me. You are sweet and caring, Loving and kind, You make me happy, Just glad to be alive. I do not know what the future hold, Or even how long our happiness will last, Nevertheless, I do know one and that is I love you. |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Malinda C. Duggan - All Rights Reserved | |||
Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was sweet. I hope all the luck in the world falls your way.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
||
|
hopeful Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 27 |
Hey I liked this poem alot. I could relate to it in a very strong way. Keep up the good work. Best of wishes, hopeful |
||
|
Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
I LOVE THIS!! it is sooo cute  ~*Pixie*~ |
||
|
Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
awww, another girl in love. I hope you stay in love too, great work, some more happy inspiration to offset the darkly riddled works in here, the world does need BOTH you know...at any rate great work, keep it up I want to see more of your work! "Happiness is nothing without the contrast of sadness" -Me |
||
|
Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Such a great poem you've written here, I love the feeling you share with it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
||
|
Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I feel different than everyone else does from this poem... it somehow radiated a feeling of sorrow for me. I wonder why it was? Maybe it's because you talk about missing this person. On the other hand, maybe I'm jealous of your writing skill. ^_^ Great poem. Try not to miss this person, when your thoughts are there, so shall he be. Keep writing. Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
||
|
Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Dopey_dope,hopeful, Pixie-Babe, Lakewalker, Poet on Acid~ Thanks so much for your replys. Allan~lol! you crack me up. Thanks for your reply. |
||
LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"I do not know what the future hold, Or even how long our happiness will last, Nevertheless, I do know one and that is I love you." This is a beautiful love poem. Although we want love to last forever, it can be fleeting. It is still wonderful, though, even if it only lasts for an instant. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
