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Author Unknown
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since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

0 posted 2001-01-07 08:34 PM

Your fear has against you turned,
Witness the power of vengence you have spurned.
Death free falls in my mind,
Evil thoughts never left behind.
Forced to absorb suffering and pain,
Piece by piece my life I regain.
Ripped my heart from my chest,
Now you see me as much more than a pest.
I became nightmare,
Step to me if you dare.
Crack your skull with a wooden pipe,
Go home and paint the wall with another stripe.
Many people attempted and failed,
From jail they were never bailed.
Run the streets like a playground,
Bodies lying in gutters were found.
Smack you to show you no fear,
In less than a second my soul shall disappear.
Emotional rage takes over my brain,
Heart sinks to nothing but pure pain.
Stole my life away,
Now what you got to say?
When a kid like me shows you no fear,
Jabs your brain like a dull spear.
On your mind I will be,
I'm the last face you;ll ever see.
Witness the pain you caused when you engaged,
A young man's life enraged.

*dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

1 posted 2001-01-07 08:42 PM

wow... this has so much behind it. it's awesome. i'm so in love with this poem!!!
can i ask what was your inspiration? this is soo good. keep it up dude...

~*Valerie*~

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

2 posted 2001-01-07 08:45 PM

wow... this sent chills up and down my spine... great job showing your emotion
~*Pixie*~

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2001-01-07 08:46 PM

a lot of comparing and intense words in this poem...
your flow and rhyme is quite delightful as usual.. keep it up my friend

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-01-07 08:50 PM

This was nice. Very powerful.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

5 posted 2001-01-07 08:53 PM

sugar-its inspired by my gf gettin killed by her ex...like most of my poems on here

pixie-thanks i appreciate the support

and thanks man really appreciate it

*dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

6 posted 2001-01-07 10:15 PM

WOAH this was really cool! *L* I could picture everything in my mind

Rock on *LOL*

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

7 posted 2001-01-08 05:37 PM

I liked a lot of your rhymes in this one, the poem is really good

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2001-01-10 09:30 PM

This one had so much emotion within it..i liked this one a lot!

Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

9 posted 2001-01-10 10:17 PM

thanks shugar, but im no longer allowed to write these, apparently the moderators think im too violent and graphic

*dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001

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