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~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14
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Maine, USA

0 posted 2001-01-07 04:02 PM



Lemme just tell you all, i have a MAD passion for cranberry sauce... it's my fave food. should be a food group but...  LOL


Please pass the corn
And the potatoes too
I feel like eating
Since I'm kinda blue

Blue not purple
Let's get it straight
Just cause I'm not happy
Doesn't mean I hate.

I am feeling blue
Just because
Someone finished up
All my cranberry sauce!


*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

© Copyright 2001 Valerie - All Rights Reserved
jeremydraul
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State of Despair
1 posted 2001-01-07 04:04 PM


lmao... this was funny
good job on expressing your madness!
best wishes

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06
Posts 380
Maine, USA
2 posted 2001-01-07 05:33 PM


Hahaha this is so funny! Don't you hate it when everyone finishes off your faveorite dish at dinner?! I hate it when my uncle gets the last piece of pie... GRR! Well done Val  

-=Sara=-

GirlsBestFriend
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since 2000-12-27
Posts 71
Planet Earth
3 posted 2001-01-07 05:40 PM


hi there! Nice one! I liked the 'blue not purple' part lol.
I feel hangry though!!!!!

~lotsa luv
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"Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world"

[This message has been edited by GirlsBestFriend (edited 01-07-2001).]

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2001-01-07 06:24 PM


LOL ... it's great to read a light-hearted fun poem once in a while ... thanks for the smile Sugarpie!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Melster
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia
5 posted 2001-01-07 06:58 PM


GREAT WORK...  I was laughing soo hard
I forgot that I was replying here...  good to see something funny in here for a change to the normal stuff, it kinda lightens the head a bit!!  

Melz!!             

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Dopey Dope
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6 posted 2001-01-07 08:27 PM


Well gee, sorry!
*gives it back*
didn't know it meant so much to you!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
7 posted 2001-01-08 05:14 PM


Well there you go, now I'm hungry

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

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8 posted 2001-01-09 06:16 PM


i preffer "Chinese take out" myself  
and the crab rangoons....oohhhhh myyyyyyy  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Allan Riverwood
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9 posted 2001-01-09 08:44 PM


argh... i LOATHE cranberry sauce!
Next thanksgiving I will fed-ex all of mine to you, ok?  ^_^
Nice poem... it is very inspiring when something that we love is torn from us so tragically.  I hope that you are coping well with your loss.  I'm always willing to lend a shoulder to cry on.

Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy.


Wicced_Witch
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 110
Clarksville, TN, USA
10 posted 2001-01-09 08:52 PM


Great poem.  It was hilarous.  I love cranberry sauce...but not that much.

Steff

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