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Author Unknown
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since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

0 posted 2001-01-07 01:30 PM

In time you will see,
Why so many choose to fear me.
Revenge is ever so sweet,
Never shall I bow in defeat.
In time you will know why,
I above all want you to die.
You shot someone I love,
I'm the one that sent death from above.
Your face haunts my dreams,
And now the time has come it seems.
The time for you to die,
And if you still wonder why.
It's all becuase of you,
What did she ever do?
Took a person's life,
And everyday i stand and strife.
To carry on my way,
And wait for that one sweet day.
Where I'll stand there and smile when others cry,
I'll be there the day you die.
But before you go,
There's something you should know.
Paybacks are hell,
Think of this in your tiny one man cell.
Show no fear,
Never again shed a single tear.
You killed the girl of my dreams,
And now to me it seems.
That thru all this in the end,
It's my life I had to mend.
Plotting revenge never followed thru,
Then it hit me what I could do.
Now you sit on death row,
And well what do ya know?
A smile crosses my face that I havent had in years,
A smile to replace five years of hurtful tears.
On death row you stay,
Should have chosen the other way...

*dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-01-07 02:05 PM

This is the third poem of yours in which a person (woman) dies from a gun shot wound. I hope all is well. Seems like you're experiencing some real life tragedy. DO enlighten us on this.
Great poem though.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Author Unknown
Member

since 2001-01-05

Posts 57
Linn MO USA

2 posted 2001-01-07 02:13 PM

alrighty can do, when i was 13 i started goin out with this incredile girl and her ex hated me and abused her and swore if she ever left him for me hed kill her but she just thought he was mad but in the end she was killed....

*dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001

Melster
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since 2000-12-09

Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia

3 posted 2001-01-07 05:05 PM

Wow... this is such an emotional peice, same witht the others you have written... I am soo glad that you came to grips with the fact that now he is being punished for what he did and will rot in hell one day... I can understand why it took 5 years to come to grips with it though... it would have been absolutely horrible for you... I would never have survived, so you are a stronger man than I - though I am a female, anyway, not the point... I hope that someday you will find happiness again!! In the mean time keep up the great posts I love your work!!

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2001-01-08 04:57 PM

You did a great job of expressing everything in your poem, keep them coming

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-01-09 06:02 PM

your poem are very powerful and there's is no doubting that
All I can say is that i'm glad that you've realized that it's not worth taking things in your own hands. If you went thru with it, nothing separates you from him. You become exactly who he is. And the way it looks, I don't think you'd like that. I know you've all this hate in you that neither of us, unless we experience the same situation, would ever know. But still, better judgement tells us to tell you to stay strong. Keep your head up my friend

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-01-13 11:49 PM

I am SOOOO sorry to hear that this happened to you...it's so sad. This is such a strong and emotional piece, it took my breathe away! This was incredibly sad and heart felt. I hope that this guy gets exactly what he deserves...Great poem!

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