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Melster
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0 posted 2001-01-06 03:37 AM


Please don't say those words to me,
You know the ones I fear you say,
Please don't confuse our friendship,
We are too good of friends to go this way.
Trust me when I say "you don't want me..."
Belive me when I tell you that
I am not who I seem to be.
Yes you have seen the 'real' me,
You know me well indeed,
But we have not really met...
You are my ex's best mate,
And I hate my ex with all my heart.
I want to stay friends with you,
This I already know, we are good friends
And I never want to change that.
You see my life is too confusing now,
My life is on a downward slope towards hell,
You don't want to be dragged down too...
You have your life ahead of you,
Mine is going to hell.
All I ask of you is that you not say these words,
Please tell me they are not the ones you say,
You do not really love me,
You can't love me
No one can!!!


Guys this one is not about the usual person, this is another friend who said he needs to talk to me about something and I fear this conversation...  I have avided it for a few days now, but I don't know how much longer I can avid it!!

Melz!!


Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

© Copyright 2001 Melanie Heagney - All Rights Reserved
Ina
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Quebec, Canada
1 posted 2001-01-06 02:49 PM


this is horrible, g-d. im really sincerly sorry this is hapening to u. but plz try and keep your head up?!
i hope more ppl read this and help.
Regina,
email me or message me if u need to talk

IsGona
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Posts 723

2 posted 2001-01-06 03:09 PM


Melster.  This is quite sad.  I hope that you will learn that you can be loved.  Time can heal any thing, but it's much easier with friends who care for you by your side.  I hope what ever he has to tell you will be music to your ears, and that you will learn that you can and deserved to be loved.
Best wishes,
Jason

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

lilpoet
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since 2000-12-30
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Dallas,Tx
3 posted 2001-01-06 05:02 PM



You seem really upset right now, but I think you should open up and if he loves you, let him.  Your ex shouldn't get in the way of love.  That happened to me one time, except it turned out that they were both wrong for me.  I still haven't found the one, but if you even think you love him, I wouldn't let him go.


~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~

Melster
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4 posted 2001-01-06 05:30 PM


Ina~  Thanks for your support, if I need anything I will send you a message okies...  thanks again!!

Isgona~  I know what you are saying...  but I just have too many other things going on in my life right now that I can't let this happen as well... thanks for your reply, I appreciate it!

Lil poet~  THanks for your reply!!  I can't let things happen here though because I have already lost one friend recently due to love and I don't want that to happen again!!  He may be "Mr Right" but if he is he will understand and respect that till I am ready to commit to him!!

Thanks everyone for your replys, it means the world to me!!

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Allan Riverwood
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5 posted 2001-01-06 06:23 PM


A downward slope to hell, you say?
You are hard on yourself... and I understand the message that you are sending, that you care too much about this person to get involved with him, because you feel that you would just damage him.  How unfortunate.  A word of advice-- listening to your instincts is risky, and can even be unwise.  Maybe this would not be so damaging for him?
Furthermore, don't be so hard on yourself.  I'll be at your side on the slope to hell, and you can always talk to me, if it helps.
I wish you the best of luck with this.

Melster
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6 posted 2001-01-06 06:36 PM


THanks Allan, it always helps to know that people are there for you...  I can understand what you are saying, but I can't commit to something I am not ready for yet...  and I don't want to bring him down with me!!

Talk to you later!!

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Dopey Dope
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7 posted 2001-01-06 09:20 PM


Well melz, i don't have any advice for you. Just good luck with this whole situation.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Melster
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8 posted 2001-01-06 11:31 PM


Thanks for reading dopey...  

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Lakewalker
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9 posted 2001-01-07 01:10 PM


You can't avoid him forever, so when you two do talk, have what you're going to say (whatever that is) figured out.  And be honest    You did a good job on the poem  < !signature-->

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 01-07-2001).]

Author Unknown
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Linn MO USA
10 posted 2001-01-07 01:34 PM


very nice poem, but ya gotta confront your fears, cant let life push you around and bring you down, look at the sitaution and prepare to hear what you fear and face it then accept it


*dont let life bring you down, dig thru the ditches and deck it in the face and reclaim your place*---Kyle Finn....2001

Melster
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11 posted 2001-01-07 04:21 PM


Thanks Lake and Author Unknown...  I guess you are right that I have to face what I am fearing I will hear...  but it's kinda hard...  THanks again!!

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Pixie-Babe03
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12 posted 2001-01-07 08:30 PM


dang girl... this situation sucks... i dated my best guy friend once and it worked good...  and we are still best friends if that helps any.  but you need to talk to your friend, the situation cannot be avoided or it wi;ll make the circumstances worse.  i hate to see or hear anyone say that they can;t be loved because it is not true... no one is unlovable it could be that this friend has very true feelings about you and if you listen to what he has to say you may realize that you do in fact feel the same way about him but you are to scared to persue a relationship with him.  Best of luck Melz keep all of us posted on what happens... most improtantly know that you can be loved hun!!
chin up!

~*Justine*~

Melster
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13 posted 2001-01-08 05:17 AM


~~Justine~~  I sit here and think...  maybe it can work, but it is a case of whether I want it to or not...  I have finally decided in my life who it is that I want...  now I just have to persue that...  I know also that he wanted it too...  so I just have to wait and see...  the problem is that it is not this friend that I want...  I have lost one friend recently over becoming too close...  (Recently as in Sunday night...)  I just don't want that to happen agian!!  Thanks for your help...  I appreciate it!!

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

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14 posted 2001-01-09 10:20 PM


I really hope things go well with this guy and you dont get put into any awkard conversations such as the one you wrote about. Great poem tho! Hope all turns out well!
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