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Is it all just...? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Is it all just a big game? My patience growing thinner as I wait... Is it all just a joke? Losing one thing after another, luck failing. Is it all here to stay? I'd do anything to change it. Happiness is just too far... Just out of grasp. I've felt this before, Have been pulled out of the darkness... Why has all this unpleasantness returned? Will it ever end? Or is it all just my life? "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Good poem Jenn. Happiness always seems farther away then it really it is. I hope it's right down the road for you Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Happiness is something that you need to have go away once in a while so you can enjoy it when it returns. Sometimes the wait is just longer than we'd choose. I hope you find happiness soon, and good job on the poem. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Sorrow can serve to magnify the effects of happiness, if you learn how to use it correctly. Just look at all that makes you sad, and compare it to what you truly love. Then what you love seems even brighter. Great poem. It really made me think. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job on this poem, but look you'll pull through this one just like you have the rest. It'll all be ok, but you need a positive outlook. This was a great way to vent out, but keep in mind that you can do it. Free yourself and fly.....flyyyyyy  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wonderful poem i liked the questioning keep searching for the answers and you will find happiness best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
sorry to hear what you are going thru its a shame that people have to hurt at all i hope you find your happiness as i do hope i find mine too keep your head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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