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DreamerGrl27
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0 posted 2001-01-02 09:48 PM



In His Own Little World

I wish there was a way
For him to feel my pain
To know everything I go through
And thats its driving me insane.
But no matter what I do
He never understands
He thinks kisses will make it better
Or walking toegther holding hands.
I need to have a talk with him
About what he did to me
But he's in his own little world
Where all of this he doesnt see.
He thinks everything is perfect
And it'll always be this way
But we're not like we used to be
There's something I need to say.
I think its to move on
And let our two paths part
'Cause pretending everything's perfect
Is beginning to break my heart.



[This message has been edited by DreamerGrl27 (edited 01-02-2001).]

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jeremydraul
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1 posted 2001-01-02 10:02 PM


i guess some guys never learn
...some dont realize what theyve done until you tell them
try to talk to him and let him know how you feel
good luck

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Virgil
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2 posted 2001-01-02 10:08 PM


First off, good poem...but make sure you have somewhere to go after you part! That's a danger you should prepare for...but anyway, good job on the poem!!!

"By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee."

"I AM CANADIAN!!"

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3 posted 2001-01-03 12:45 PM


Hon, I feel your pain. It's not gonna be easy, but if you're not totally happy with what's happening in this relationship, and you feel it's time to part, then it's time to part.

'But he's in his own little world
Where all of this he doesnt see.
He thinks everything is perfect
And it'll always be this way'

That got to me. Describes my situation perfectly a couple weeks ago. I hope it works out for you, whatever you choose to do.  

~*Rhonda


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If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph

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4 posted 2001-01-03 12:48 PM


This was great. I liked it a lot. Hope things run smoothly.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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I admire it daily

Melster
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5 posted 2001-01-03 06:07 AM


Letting go is hard for guys as well as girls..  talk to him...  it's the best thing to do!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Neokrew
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6 posted 2001-01-03 12:29 PM


This was a really good poem, I hope everything works out between you and the person you wrote this about.

--Neo

DreamerGrl27
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7 posted 2001-01-03 04:56 PM


Thanks for your replies guys...it really means a lot to me!!!
Lakewalker
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8 posted 2001-01-04 11:50 AM


Communication, communication, communication!!  Tell him how you feel (if you haven't already).  Give him time to react too, you have to be fair

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Allan Riverwood
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9 posted 2001-01-04 11:54 AM


If you truly feel this strongly that you must part with him, then my advice is to do as you feel that you must do.  Just a nosy suggestion is all.  ^_^
A nice poem, it is evident that a lot of emotion was put into it.  Try not to be heartbroken afterwards, and maybe try talking with him about this before making any sudden decisions.

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10 posted 2001-01-05 02:03 PM


Awwww hunnie!!!!This was a great poem (as always!!)...I think you should definately talk to him about it cuz we both know that he's pretty self-centered. I dont want to see him break your heart...or anyone for that matter but especially not him. Great poem hun...keep em comin!
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