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Behold (a brand spanking new one!) |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA 
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-=Behold=- Ice is cold, Ice is fire. You are all That I desire. Tickled pink, But I was blue. My heart glowed red When I met you. Hell is Heaven, Heaven is mine. All of this Is most divine. Old is new, Low is high. I feel as though I could fly Passion and time, A wave of cupid’s wand, Hold me and behold— Growing, is our bond. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this was sweet.. kinda ironic in a way... very intriguing... ..great post good luck ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
ya everything he said.....lol...(caught in a spot light)lol. it was great! Regina |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this is cool. good job.  )*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hermes would love this poem.....seeing he's the God of duality. Nice one here. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, Good job on this post!  It's written in an interesting way, nice work  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this is different, great job! OOVE YOU! Teenie |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This was really adorable...I love how everything was so contradicting. I really liked it! Great job |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Good poem! It kind of makes me think of old valentines that we used to hand out in Elementary school... |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This is bad but bad is good so... oh I don't know... I'm confused.. hehe Just Kidding This was great. Thanks for the read Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this poem was adorible...i liked it a lot =o) Good job |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great to see that someone is posting some happiness in here!! Great post!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
i loved the rhythm in this piece it was beutiful... |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Hey everyone! Thanx so much to everyone who replied! This is my most replied-to poem yet! WOOHOO!! Now I just gotta decide whether or not I should give it to him... Hmm... Well, again, thanx! -=Suga=- |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
awesome awesome awesome i love it!!! this reminds me of a part in the movie "Shakespeare in love" the part when he was describing his love and he says "like rain and sunshine at the same time" --- well, he said something like that it's like your love is boundless this is really good thanks  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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