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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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With eyes closed, ears blistered I feel no pain, its not that it isnt their anymore i just cant feel it I call out your name in the inky sky but all I get is the silence, a rumbling silence you left me alone, my one bestfriend, decided life wasnt what u needed anymore, but it was what u hated The anger I want to scream is stuck somewhere between my heart and my head, wishes dont help dreams keep me up walking up in a cold sweat wondering what im still doing here,maybe it was your path to leave me all alone, to let me suffer you promised me a thousand promises and broke every one, you arent my friend anymore, your just bones but forgive me friend,i still love you and I cant quite hate you because you are all I wanted and all I had in a world filled with hate. Regina ummm...i know imk not suppose to double post...but i really need input.... Regina |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
i loved it... silence is tough to handle... ...but the answers will be provided somehow they will come, just be patient best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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CareBear3 Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 39New Hampshire |
This was beautiful, I know what you mean when you want to be angry and want to scream, but somehow all you are is hurt. Great job! "In great moments life seems neither right nor wrong but something greater it seems inevitable" ~Kelley |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Stuff like this is hard. Eventually things will get better. 'you left me alone, my one bestfriend, decided life wasnt what u needed anymore, but it was what u hated' Does this mean what I think it means, or am I reading too much into it again? I love the way you can express yourself. It's not an easy thing to do all the time. ~*Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great regi, I so hope things start to get better for you. Do tell me about brad.....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
If this is happening now I hope you get through this time alright, it's going to be hard. You expressed your feelings well in the poem. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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