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Neokrew
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since 2000-12-24

Posts 60
VA

0 posted 2001-01-02 05:04 PM

What I dream about

It seems you were sent from above
Everything about you perfect in my eyes
I live for this never ending love
My heart beats for only you

With every breath I take
I’m wanting you there with me
I want to sit you down by the lake
And explain just how I feel

I would never wish for our hearts to part
For that alone would be worse than death
This love which is beyond any known words
Your what I dream about.
(For Robin)
--Neo

[This message has been edited by Neokrew (edited 01-02-2001).]

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2001-01-02 05:19 PM

I love the feelings you share in this and the poem is written well, nice job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

2 posted 2001-01-02 05:31 PM

thsi poem is so cute

great expression! i look forward to more of your posts

Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-01-02 06:38 PM

This is so cute! I hope that someday someone writes something like this for me! Great work!

[This message has been edited by Suga_Baby (edited 01-02-2001).]

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

4 posted 2001-01-02 06:44 PM

This is a beautiful tribute to your loved one. I'm glad that you feel this way for someone, and you describe it very well. Thanks for posting!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

DreamerGrl27
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 142

5 posted 2001-01-02 09:04 PM

This is so sweet! I really loved it. If a guy gave this to me I would just melt. It flowed really well, and the message was really sweet. Hope everything's going well.

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

6 posted 2001-01-02 09:35 PM

great post
beatiful words
i loved the dreamlike atmophere and deliverance of your words
best wishes

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-01-03 12:44 PM

This was great. LOve poems are nice to read, and i hope things work out for you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Tears of Glass
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

8 posted 2001-01-03 11:04 AM

I did NOT know you could write like this! This was incredible! I LOVED it! I liked the way it flowed.. wow.. I agree with DreamerGrl27. If a guy ever gave something like this to me, I would melt! Awesome job.. and I cant wait to read more from you.. soon, right?

Wonderful poem, I loved reading it.

*Jennifer

Neokrew
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since 2000-12-24

Posts 60
VA

9 posted 2001-01-04 11:13 AM

Hey,

Thank you all for your kind replies. I don't feel as if I am 1/2 the poet most of you are so I really don't post as much as I should ( I really don't write as much as I should eather) I really want to thank you for the time you take to read my poems.

It is really nice to come online and know that I will have a reply to my poem and someone has liked it.

Your Fellow Netpoet
--Neo

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2001-01-04 09:30 PM

This poem is so sweet! Your an excellent poet. Keep em coming!

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

11 posted 2001-01-05 01:10 PM

Nicely done. I truly enjoyed this. Please keep posting more.

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