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Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

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Central Maine

0 posted 2001-01-02 10:23 AM

Here goes onther stupid poem LOL where do i come up with this junk??

-=Mr. Right?=-

A gleam of hope,
a ray of light,
could you be,
my "Mr. Right"?

Only time will tell
wait and see,
in the future
you and me?

You are so nice,
you seem so new.
I cherish all
my time with you

I beam with joy
it's been a while,
since i donned
this foolish smile.

A gleam of hope,
a ray of light,
could you be
my "Mr. Right"?

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2001-01-02 11:23 AM

We always wonder if our latest is the one that's right for us. I love how you describe this as:

"A gleam of hope,
a ray of light"

Keep up the good work!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-01-02 01:28 PM

This is neat. I like the words you picked to use.

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

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State of Despair

3 posted 2001-01-02 02:15 PM

nice poem
not junk at all
i really liked "I beam with joy...A gleam of hope"
nice imagery!
best wishes,
~JDR

"A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

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4 posted 2001-01-02 02:42 PM

Nice poem. We always want to find Mr. Right, and we always hope we won't be 50 before we find him. Hehehe j/k I loved it keep it up.
xoxo
Jenn

"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

5 posted 2001-01-02 04:48 PM

thank you all for your replies

i liek to knwo what y'all think of my work
~*Pixie*~

mikeykrazy
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since 2000-12-20

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6 posted 2001-01-02 05:05 PM

rember this poetry is never stupid and if any says it is that don't have an open mind.
loved the poem and keep it up

thing happen in life that just need a poem. then ther poems just for the heack of it.

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

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Central Maine

7 posted 2001-01-02 05:11 PM

thank you mikeykrazy

i say the same thing about anyone elses poetry but mine usually LOL
~*Pixie*~

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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Riding

8 posted 2001-01-02 05:34 PM

Junk? If that's junk, where did you buy it? I want some! I love it! Don't stop writing your "junk", kay?

~*Rhonda

"I am Canadian" - Joe
If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

9 posted 2001-01-02 05:39 PM

Skyfire- LOL well i am glad you liked this

i dont; knwo it just seemed kind of juvenile to me... but maybe i am too critical of my work? thankyou again

~*Justine*~

Pixie-Babe03
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10 posted 2001-01-02 06:18 PM

Teenie I OOVE you! And I OOVE this! *L* It's like you got in my head and wrote down what I was thinking about Paul on that night 3 weeks ago... NICE!!!!!

-=Beanie=-

Pixie-Babe03
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11 posted 2001-01-02 06:22 PM

dang girl we are so much alike LOL its scary! we go though the same phases i swear LOL i'm glad you like it

~*teenie*~

Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

12 posted 2001-01-02 06:28 PM

Hey doofus! You saved your login on my comp! I didn't even REALIZE that I was under your name when I posted that! HAHAHA! Tard!

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

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Central Maine

13 posted 2001-01-02 09:11 PM

LMFAO!!! if you didnt; realize i saved my login how does it make ME the doofus-- goober head LMAO hahahaha OOVE YOU!!!
~*Teenie*~

Dopey Dope

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14 posted 2001-01-03 12:06 PM

Yes yes, i am your Mr. Right......it's ok..... We all know you're in love with me.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

15 posted 2001-01-03 12:29 PM

aww this was so cute. all your poems are so cute lol sorry if im soundin corny..but i do like this

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people

16 posted 2001-01-04 11:16 AM

Nice job on this one!

I like it a lot.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

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Central Maine

17 posted 2001-01-04 03:43 PM

well i guess my secrets out!! yep.. this was written for Javier LOL
Lake- i am glad you liekd this i can;t wait to see more of yours! you need to post more!!!

thank you all for your replies!
~*Justine*~

Acies

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18 posted 2001-01-04 08:46 PM

this is really sweet. you must have swept the guy off of his feet when you told him this. Did you? If not, you should, and the poem should take care of him

Thanks for the read and keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06

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Maine, USA

19 posted 2001-01-04 08:51 PM

AHHHH no fair! How do you get so many darn replies? I can sit here and reply to every single poem for the day and then I will get like 3 replies on one of mine! Grrr... Well, oove you anyways :þ

-=Beanie=-

Pixie-Babe03
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Central Maine

20 posted 2001-01-04 09:58 PM

acire--
no i didn't tell the guy this... i don't think i would have the guts to even give this to him!! *L* i am a chicken

thanks for the reply

~*Justine*~

xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

21 posted 2001-01-05 11:09 PM

Aww this was a cute poem hun. I hope he is your Mr.Right!! I dont think mine is out there though..i think mine got run over by a truck or something..but hey...i hope this guy is yours!! Cute poem =o)

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

22 posted 2001-01-05 11:42 PM

LOL thank you sugarhigh lol i think mine got hit by a truck too but maybe the one i have will be close!!

~*Justine*~

Melster
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23 posted 2001-01-06 03:22 AM

Great work...

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

24 posted 2001-01-07 08:42 PM

thanks Melz!!!

(oooh finally the smileys are back to normal!! LOL)

IsGona
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since 2000-07-14

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25 posted 2001-01-07 09:07 PM

LOL... I hated those x-mas smileys to

.. Much better.. hehe

Nice poem here. There's a guy out there for every one, just keep you eys open.
Jason
ps I miss spoke. there is a guy out there for every *women*... That is what I meant

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

GirlsBestFriend
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since 2000-12-27

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Planet Earth

26 posted 2001-01-08 06:18 PM

I liked this alot

~lotsa luv

"Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world"

Pixie-Babe03
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Central Maine

27 posted 2001-01-08 07:20 PM

LMAO!!!! well Jason... there is a guy out there for some guys too... but we wont; go there LOL not that i have anything against those people *L*

(enjoying the regular smileys....) thank you for your reply!!

Grils Best Friend- thank you

i am glad you liekd htis

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