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~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14
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Maine, USA

0 posted 2000-12-31 06:30 PM


Can you help me?
It seems I've lost my way?
I don't know where to go
Is there a place I can stay?

My heart has mislead me
And now I am confused,
I felt like it was the right direction
Now it is just hurt and bruised

I hope you can help me
In repairing my broken heart,
The person who broke it before
Laughed and chose to depart.

I am afraid to like you
Because that girl likes you too
My heart is talking again
Should I listen to its views?

It tells me not to worry
Everything will work out okay,
But how am I to trust it again
When before it lead me astray.

Right now though I don't care
My feelings for you are strong
And as for that other girl, oh well
Right with you is where I belong.



*do not offer yourself to the world, yet let the world offer itself to you*--Me :)

© Copyright 2000 Valerie - All Rights Reserved
Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29
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1 posted 2000-12-31 06:41 PM


woo hoo!! go booger! this is great and you KNOW i love it!! good luck sis!
~*Justine*~

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2 posted 2000-12-31 07:01 PM


This was great......another heart felt poem.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2000-12-31 08:55 PM


Aww this was a cute poem. Im sorry to hear that you got  hurt but hopefully fate led you in the right direction now and this guy will treat you the way you deserve to be treated. Great poem and i hope everything works out the way you want it to!
~sugarpie313~
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4 posted 2000-12-31 09:20 PM


I hope everything works out too. Thanks for replying everyone   I just hope no more problems arise after i give this to the certain guy that is receiving my strong feelings. LOL

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

DreamerGrl27
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since 2000-10-29
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5 posted 2000-12-31 10:30 PM


I loved this one. I hope you dont get hurt again...because thats the worse kind of pain.
Melster
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia
6 posted 2001-01-01 12:49 PM


Great work... most of us know how you feel and we hope that the pain goes away soon and that you can be happy again!!

Melz!!


Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

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7 posted 2001-01-02 07:18 PM


this is really sweet.  Hey, go ahead and follow your heart.  i know it's scary, but life is not suppose to be easy.  good luck.  thanks for the read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
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State of Despair
8 posted 2001-01-02 09:09 PM


def. go with your heart here
nothing like missing an oppurtunity as grand as love
cherish your feelings and respect them
best wishes

~JDR

"Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde

Lakewalker
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9 posted 2001-01-03 06:22 PM


Sounds like you're going to share this, I hope it goes well.  Please tell us how it goes!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06
Posts 380
Maine, USA
10 posted 2001-01-04 08:42 PM


Oooh Val this is SOOOO good! I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! GREAT WORK  
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