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Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 2000-12-29 05:36 PM

It's been so long
since I've had your words
your love to keep me warm
Our past has made me colder
because it's over
and you've given up on me
I see chances
and I want to talk to you
but I cry instead
I can't escape the burn
although I've tried my hardest
It's been a while,
I should be over you
but when I lost you
I lost myself
and now it's too late
to scream< !signature-->

Live and let live.

~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 12-29-2000).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-12-29 06:13 PM

This was so sad. I liked the poem though. You are a very talented writer. Keep them rollin'!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2000-12-29 06:16 PM

Is this a recent poem? If so, get better! Don't be sad... no guy is worth being sad over. (To the guys: no girl is worth being sad over, either

) I know it hurts, but it'll get better... awesome way to get it all out.

~*Skyfire

*~Always Canadian*~
~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

3 posted 2000-12-29 06:50 PM

Thanks so much you guys (or girls..you know what I mean).

I've seen worse times...I think I'll be fine. I mean I know I will.

I am no one if not myself.

~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

4 posted 2000-12-29 07:05 PM

Really great poem. Made me a little sad inside. I know I've had my problems with it but this line did it to me:
but when I lost you
I lost myself
I can really relate to that feeling. It is really horrible. Good luck
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

DreamerGrl27
Member

since 2000-10-29

Posts 142

5 posted 2000-12-29 08:10 PM

I'm sorry this happened to you, it happened to me too so I know how you feel if that helps at all. When you lose a person like that, they take a part of you with them. The poem was really good, and I hope everything's okay.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2000-12-30 11:00 AM

This poem was really good...im really sorry to hear that this happened to you...i hope everything is better now.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

7 posted 2000-12-30 02:33 PM

Am I alright? Well, I'm breathing aren't I? lol Thanks a lot you guys. I don't need your sympathy though, I'm going to be fine.

Angel

I am no one if not myself.

~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

8 posted 2000-12-30 05:39 PM

I like the way this is written, good job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

9 posted 2000-12-30 11:49 PM

very good.. it was written well

~JDR

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

10 posted 2000-12-31 12:31 PM

A very sad piece here, but a great job in expressing your emotions! Keep up the great work!

*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

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