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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
One again, this is one that I wrote a while back. Thanks for reading! ~Confused~ I no longer know what to do, I don’t know if you feel the same way. I wish you felt this way too, I wish I could know what to say. I don’t know what to do any more, When you’re around my feelings don’t seem to be there. But as soon as you walk out of the door, My heart begins to tear. This confusion makes my heart sore, And sometimes I feel like I can’t take it anymore. Then I think about how much I care for you, If only you felt this way too. I wish I could tell you, But right now I’m really scared. I really don’t know how to, Because I don’t know if you really ever cared. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thanks again for reading. God Bless, - tq_99 "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
wow i can relate to this poem so well.. it is great  keep it up!!!~*Pixie*~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I can relate to it too. Thanks for the read!! ~Carly WhY ShOuLd I Be hypnotized by someone else's lies WhY ShOuLd I Take time and pride in what someone else believes... |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Very nice. I hate that feeling of confusion. I have been dealing with it for some time and it doesn't get any easier. You described it really well. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
Hey thanks everybody for the replies and the encouragement. I'm glad that you liked it. I'm sorry to hear that you are able to relate to it though, I hope everything will be ok for each one of you. God Bless, - tq_99 "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I too can relate to this poem very well..its an annoying feeling to have that i can admit...i enjoyed this poem..keep it up |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I too can relate. I'm glad someone could finally put that feeling into words, though. I've tried, but it just doesn't work for me. Keep up the awesome work!  ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You said this was a while ago, so now I'm wondering if you ever got unconfused about this? Good job on the poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
Thanks again everybody for the replies. Especially since I never have to much time to get on and don't always reply to everybody else's, but I will try harder now. Lake- HYeah, this was a while ago, and I worked everything out and I'm not confused any more, thanks for the concern. God Bless, - tq_99 "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
well this was really good tq you write with such passion and its great keep it up. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. Seems like everybody can relate and that's the sign of a wonderful poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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