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tq_99
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0 posted 2000-12-27 04:46 PM


hey, just to let everybody know ahead of time, I am not going through anything like this aymore, I wrote this a logn time ago, and forgot about it. Along with a few that I will be posting later. Which I found a few days ago.  

~Dreams~

As I lay here I wait for sleep to creep,
So my happiness I may keep
For when I wake,
It is like a quake,
My happiness taken away,
Before I can think of a word to say.
My happiness it seems,
Only exists in my dreams.
My emotions are at war,
Which causes my heart to be sore.
So as I lay here dreaming of true happiness and peace, I really just wait for my anger and hurt to cease.



"Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing"

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Melster
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1 posted 2000-12-27 06:34 PM


I am glad that you are now over this and happy again...?  It is always hard going through this, but Im glad you are over this now!!  Great write!!

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

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2 posted 2000-12-27 07:10 PM


Dreams can be great escapes, but the fall to reality can really hurt. I'm glad that you don't have to live through your dreams anymore. Thanks for sharing.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



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3 posted 2000-12-27 07:12 PM


OOPS, double-post

[This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 12-27-2000).]

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4 posted 2000-12-27 09:14 PM



  I really enjoyed reading this. Great write

   ~Carly

WhY
ShOuLd I
Be hypnotized by someone else's lies
WhY
ShOuLd I
Take time and pride in what someone else believes...

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5 posted 2000-12-28 12:41 PM


Well i'm really glad to hear that your not going through anything like this anymore in your life...its a tough thing to go through and im very happy that your out of it. Great poem tho...keep it up!

Lakewalker
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6 posted 2000-12-28 06:22 PM


I am also glad to hear you're over this.  The poem was good, thanks for sharing it

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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7 posted 2000-12-29 04:44 PM


Good to know you're over this.
nice job on this tho.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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