The head of Security(The head of my foot!)

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layla
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since 2000-11-19

Posts 74

0 posted 2000-12-27 11:41 AM

I can feel the tension growing and growing
patiently i wait not knowing what my fate is
then she walks in
I've never seen her before nor did i want to
a look of rage covered her face and to me she resembeled a dog ready to scarf down a peice of meat
after 1 hour and a half of telling myself that I'm not gonna cry-i break down
Obviusly we are not allowed to make mistakes is wut im thinking
so here she is "The head of Security"
The head of my foot
hounding me, degrading me, ruining my christmas
"She was just doing her job" and indeed she did it well"  she picked apart the situation and made me look awful.
Was it my fault that i was all alone on christmas eve?  On a busy day and i made one mistake, one mistake!
"I reccomend that you do not wrk in that department anymore" she says
u wanna know wut i reccomend-(i wanted to say it sooooooooo bad but i have more respect than that).
"im going to write u up"
write me up!!!!!!!!!!!
the tension builds
building
building
u know wut
I quit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BAM
slam the door
I dont need that in my life

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2000-12-27 01:36 PM

You describe your feelings very well, but if you don't mind me asking, What happened? This confuses me. Guess I'm just curious.
Jon

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

2 posted 2000-12-27 01:43 PM

Yuck. I know how that feels and I don't envy you on this experience. You're right though, you don't need that in your life. Great job.

Live and let live.

~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-12-27 03:46 PM

This was interesting, I really like the ending:
"the tension builds
building
building
u know wut
I quit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BAM
slam the door
I dont need that in my life"

Good job on this!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

4 posted 2000-12-27 04:12 PM

Hi there. In the beginning of this I'm thinkin...oh yeh, another unrequited love story or something...but BAM! Very, very cool. Keep it up!!

~Carly

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2000-12-29 03:55 PM

This was great.........I woulda told her what I recomended.....hehe bye!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2000-12-30 02:51 PM

this is a really bad situation. But don't you think that might be the one thng she wanted you to do. And that is to quit. I would'nt have given her the satisfaction. I would've gone to someone in a higher possition and write her up

you did a really expressive job

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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