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Tears of Glass
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

0 posted 2000-12-26 04:12 PM

Shattering,
Through my window,
Comes your harsh
And angry words.
The panes fall to peices,
Loudly, but unheard.
Pain rips
Through my bedroom walls,
Leaving its residue
Where there had once been
Helping comfort.
Hatred grew quickly,
And now my house in in shambles.
It tore itself down.
You've trampled my house,
And my soul,
To the ground.

*Jennifer

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2000-12-26 04:24 PM

Great poem. Very good use of words. It's terrible having to live in a home that is plagued with fighting and hatred, I've been there. Good luck
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2000-12-26 04:27 PM

Hey. There was something about this that...I don't know...sucked me in, brought me to that world....

~Carly

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-12-27 01:18 PM

Great expression! I really like the way this poem is written, the words have a real meaning. nice job.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

4 posted 2000-12-27 02:19 PM

I relate to this one well, and unfortunately, many people do. Hopefully you'll rebuild your own castle in the clouds. You'll find security therein. Wonderful poem.

Live and let live.

~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

5 posted 2000-12-27 03:22 PM

Wow...that was really good!! I hope things all work out good for you. Just keep your head up! Great job on this poem! Keep writing!!

Much Luv,
~*~SweetStuff~*~< !signature-->

~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~

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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2000-12-29 03:43 PM

Sad poem.....get up tho.......pick your soul up and keep going.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2000-12-30 02:20 PM

very expressive. don't let this put you down though, stand up and move forward. that's what makes us better

good luck

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

8 posted 2000-12-30 03:13 PM

nice details and form. I liked it a lot!

~JDR

"A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

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