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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im wondering if i should let go, Of that little faith left. Of you and me together, Forever healing my loneliness. You say that it will happen, In upcoming days. I feel that those are just words, And the actions are never to follow in the days. I want to believe so badly, That you and i are meant to be. But all i see is you lingering, And there is lonely ol'me. So maybe its time for me to face the facts, Give up my wish-on-a-star dreams. Not look at us for what i want us to be, But for what we really mean. Im still not shur yet, Im just testing out the thought. Still holding on to that lil faith left. Hoping to get what i sought. |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great poem! I know how this feels, I was stuck here a few months ago and decided to hold on due to a certain little problem I had (I will post a poem about it soon...) and in the end I reealised I should have let go when I thought of it as I would not have hurt soo much... but that was just me, I hope that you can hold onto this glimmer of hope and it all works out for the best!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very good ponderings here Shugar, nicely written. Sometimes it's good to listen to that little voice of intuition ... if it continues to nudge, it may be for the right reasons. Keep exploring your thoughts, and you'll find your answers become clearer. Happy Holidays and Best Wishes, /Kit |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Letting go is indeed painful, even when its something that brings hurt...But sometimes, holding on is harder...I wish you luck in your decision and things to come. ~Carly |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Very nice poem. I enjoyed this. I can relate. Letting go is the hardest part. When you're in a bad relationship you tend to cling to every happy memory, forgetting all the bad. Good luck Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
its all true.powerful emotions.hope to see more. Regina |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thanx everyone for your replies!!!!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The poem is written well and I hope you figure out what you're going to do soon! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
Wow, this was a really good poem. I'm sorry to hear that you are going through this though. It wil al work out for the best though. Keep up the great work! God Bless, tq_99 "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good luck to you shugar.......best wishes on this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Just don't over analize the situation cause it'll only lead you to insanity. Thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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