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branden726
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0 posted 2000-12-23 06:20 PM


I sat around thinking,
I thought for hours on end,
Why? Why do I seem to have a huge ego?
An ego that has made me think im better,
An ego that has made me be mean,
Something that made me so dark,
I am now throwing away.

I am so mean to people I do not know,
Yet to some people im the one everyone should know,
I am the best thing thats ever happend to some ppl,
But the worst to many others.

I have a sudden change in heart,
You, The person next to you, and the person next to them,
Will all know my name,
No, not the ego, the NAME.

What I mean is that I have learned to love,
I have learned to care,
I have learned to show that yes no matter who you are ill always be there.

Please with Christmas 2 days from now,
Lord, Forgive for all that I have done wrong,
The times I was in trouble or that times that ive done wrong,
Plz forgive me, That cat has caught my tongue.

Thanks for love and thanks for care everyone at passions i want you to know that no matter who you are im always here!

© Copyright 2000 Branden Jacobs - All Rights Reserved
Ina
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1 posted 2000-12-23 08:58 PM


are u tellimng u have a big ego?tsk tsk tsk.well u seemed to change your tune!wonderful!
regina

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2 posted 2000-12-24 12:43 PM


This was nice braden.....keep posting pal.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Melster
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since 2000-12-09
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Brisbane, Qld, Australia
3 posted 2000-12-24 02:52 AM


Well done, I haven't been here long, but my time here has been great, everyone here writes well.  Branden you seem a very caring person and you always offer any advice you have...  we all have times in our lives that we go through and we often regret them, but we must remember that we are growing up and learning from our mistakes...

Melz!!


Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

Lakewalker
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4 posted 2000-12-26 12:53 PM


This is great writing and a great message, thanks for posting this one branden

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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jeremydraul
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State of Despair
5 posted 2000-12-26 01:26 PM


cleansing the system... you just wanted extra presents! jk, i love the caring, serious message.

jeremy r

"A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
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6 posted 2000-12-26 04:16 PM


Wow that was beautiful!! I think thats all that I need to say...
Great poem, Keep writing!!!

Much Luv,
~*~SweetStuff~*~

PS~ Merry day after Christmas...hehe j/k!
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