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tq_99
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0 posted 2000-12-23 05:53 PM


~DEAR LORD~

Dear Lord, I’m sorry for the wrongs I’ve done,
And I continue to do,
God I thank you for sending your son,
And I pray that I will be able to live myself for you.

Lord I know that I have, and will, slip up
Because I always do,
And when I do I feel like a helpless pup,
I just pray that you will help me to trust in you.

Lord I love you so much,
And I know you love me too.
And with just a single touch,
I’ll be in heaven with you.

         - tq_99



"Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing"

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LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-12-23 06:14 PM


This is a beautiful prayer. I'm so glad that you have such a wonderful relationship with our Lord. Thank you for sharing this with us.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



branden726
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2 posted 2000-12-23 06:23 PM


i to have kinda joined in on saying prayer ive realized i wanna go to heaven and not hell!

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"


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3 posted 2000-12-23 11:37 PM


This was so beautiful! I loved every word of it. Keep the faith strong.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Melster
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4 posted 2000-12-24 04:45 AM


Great to see that soo many people have faith in the lord...

Melz!!


Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

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5 posted 2000-12-24 02:05 PM



  Hey, this was a wonderful poem.  Thanks for reminding me to keep the faith...

   ~Carly

WhY
ShOuLd I
Be hypnotized by someone else's lies
WhY
ShOuLd I
Take time and pride in what someone else believes...

tq_99
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6 posted 2000-12-24 10:42 PM


Thank you all for the compliments, they mean a lot to me. I'm glad to see how many people put their faith in the Lord. Thank you all. God bless,


      tq_99

"Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing"

Lakewalker
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7 posted 2000-12-26 11:14 PM


God is awesome, just remember that He'll be helping you with everything.  Thanks for sharing the poem

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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