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katherine
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0 posted 2000-12-21 10:47 PM


I want to tell you how i feel and hope it will be ok. But i don't know how to tell you that I've fallen for you. I don't want to lose you. If i tell you and you don't feel the same way then what do i do?

I think you know but i know even if you feel the same way you won't do anything about it. I can't wait to talk to you! I long to see you. Your the first one i un to when things are hard. If you weren't there i don't know what I'd do.

I know kate would kill me for likeing you cause you hurt her. but all the while she was only useing you only you could not see it.

I've afraid to tell you cause i'm afriad of getting hurt agian. Josh hurt bad enough and i haven't spoken to him since. But you you wouldn't hurt me i know that never on purpose. I couldn't handle the rejection if i told you.


i wrote this about a really good friend of mine cause i just don't know what to do.

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1 posted 2000-12-22 12:33 PM


This sounds like a really tough situation. I can really feel your confusion and pain. The only advice I can offer is to stop listening to others and stop thinking about your past. Thanks for sharing.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
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2 posted 2000-12-22 02:04 AM


Well this situation sucks. I hope everything works out for everybody in the end. Goodluck!



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3 posted 2000-12-22 12:11 PM


This is a tough situation..i hoep things work out for you in the end and he doesnt hurt you...but being that he hurt one of your friends already i would be very careful if i were you...good poem hun...i hope everything worls out well
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4 posted 2000-12-26 12:03 PM


I sensed your confusion too.  I don't really know what to say about dealing with this, but I hope things work out best for you, whatever that may be.  Good job on the poem!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Ina
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5 posted 2000-12-26 12:19 PM


it was a poem full of emotion. confusion and pain. so well put together. good luck in this situation,all will be alright.
Regina

Melster
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6 posted 2000-12-27 04:52 PM


Argh, I know this situation all toooo well...  you have to do what your heart is telling you...  if you think he feels the same way then chances are he does...  I felt like this once...  my best friend had just shattered his heart though, and I told him how I felt...  he told me he wasn't ready and so we kept our friendship and nothing changed...  then he told me he loved me and left for the Air Force...  So...  the moral of the story is do what you think is right...  I am now letting go of Michael and continuing again with our friendship!!  If he is a true friend then nothing will stand between your friendship okies!!  Good Luck!!

Melz!!


Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

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