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Non- Conformist's Lament
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Non- Conformist's Lament |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI 
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I travel roads less passed by all; Mind trapped within my world. Blue eyes are distant, bleak and small And fingers: burned and curled. I lie awake my lonely nights, Awaiting my late peace. Tears bonded to my rocky plight; Their falling fails to cease. My self-esteem has disapeared While People's laughter grows. The blood of innocence is smeared; My scars: lined up in rows. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is really well-written. It's always hard being diffrent from everyone else, but you should never change for anyone. Just keep going the way you are. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow this was beautiful! I loved this carly. Being different is great!!!!!!!!!!! Be proud with who you are........ Love you bunches!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
This is an AWESOME poem!!!!! so so good!! katherine |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Wow... you are such a good writter. I love reading your poems... And DD is right "being different is great" can't wait for the next one IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
its great!but i gotta no what a "non-conformist" is? i really enjoy your poetry , waiting for the netx one. Regina |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey everyone! Thanks so much for reading and replying. And Ina, a conformist would be a person who falls into society's way of doing everything, so a non-conformist would be the opposite. Thanks again!! ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"I lie awake my lonely nights, Awaiting my late peace. Tears bonded to my rocky plight; Their falling fails to cease." I liked that stanza a lot and the whole poem is done very well. Great job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
intriguing ideas here. another thread to my library jeremy r "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
dang girl...i don't how ive been missing your poems, i guess it's my loss. Glad i read your haiku...tat made me decide to go back and read your other poems. Keep writing cause your poems are of talent's gift.  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Thanks so much guys, it means a lot to me... |
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