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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA 
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My wish was a wish That would not come true. But that was bound to change, For then I met you I got butterflies inside When I saw you that day. That smile of yours Took my words away. The first kiss we shared Brought a feeling so new. You make me so happy-- I’m glad to have met you Was it a change of luck, Or a twist of destiny? Could it have been meant For the two of us would meet? Either way I don’t care, But my heart is on sleeve. Giving you this is to take a risk, So please don’t up and leave. After all, We fit together, you know. Two pieces of a two-piece puzzle That only together go. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is really nice. The end is awesome. After all, "We fit together, you know. Two pieces of a two-piece puzzle That only together go." I hope everything works out. Jon |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful love poem. I'm glad that two more pieces of the puzzle have come together. Best of luck!  "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This is really nice...I liked it a lot. I loved the whole idea about two puzzle pieces fitting together...they are only perfect for each other even thought some others may come close...just like two people are perfect for each other. This analagy was so true and so creative!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You're writing a lot of love poems! OOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! This guy is lucky!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Sounds like you really fell for this guy hun...i hope that everything works out and you get what you want with him! Great poem |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You did a great job on this, I really like the beginning of the poem. And I'm glad you're feeling like this "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
The puzzle pieces, fit very well together it seems for the two of you. good luck with him and keep on writing! Regina |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great poem, keep up the great work!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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