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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Death is a subject that scares some people, And many people think death is evil. But everyone knows that someday they will die, Then day all their loved one's will have to say goodbye. Since no one knows when that day will come, Or if they will die normal or get shot by a gun. This is to every woman and man, Live each day the best you can. Lauren |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
"This is to every woman and man, Live each day the best you can" this message is great..i agree..people should live every day to the fullest like every day will be their last and then maybe more people would be happier and stuff...i liked the poem too.. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This had a great message. Good job on this one. I hope to do just that!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
i agree...great message  Keep it up*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Thanx to you guys who replied this poem I wrote a long time ago and even though it's short I think it has a good message. Lauren |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
i ummmm.....agree. It was a good poem. keep it up. Regina |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Bump |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
i like the message it's a good one. katherine |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Excellent message, and more people should read this!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Sorry Topgun, I am getting a lil slack here... page three and I still ain't seen it! Sorry... You have wonderfully described a difficult situation... some people don't like to accept death, though one day it will affect us all... there are only two certain things in life... death and taxes!! look forward to seeing more... Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
great message... I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
good message, good poem, good-night! ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Thanks. I cried. That's okay, though! I needed to Keep writing, that is awesome!~*Skyfire "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Such truth in such short words....great job! Excellent poem! |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Great job. |
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