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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
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Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2000-12-20 03:49 PM


Stained wood, shaped into
a unique form, Decorated
with all sorts of
skateboard labels
The soft plucking and
strumming of each string
They said, I couldn't play
but I can, after 4 years
I can pick up that guitar and
play my heart out.
The soft rythms and the hard-core
punk, the vocals I use to accompany
my playing is my life
Sound rushing through my ears
I'm home again
I can pick up any guitar and play
Life isnt all bad
Then after hours of trying to restablish
it all
I walk to a fresh grave, with an acoustic
guitar, I play until my fingers are raw and
sore
The soft wood and the hard stone I lean on,
feels so safe
but i have to go, so I'll carry on and
go back to playing in the band, feeling life
surge through me.

~Regina~
               ~~RIP James, I love you~~


© Copyright 2000 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-12-20 04:48 PM


Sorry to hear about James, I hope you're ok.  I think this poem is written very well, I like how it's done!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
2 posted 2000-12-20 05:11 PM


im sorry about him to....but life goes on  .
im glad u liked it
Regina

LoveBug
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3 posted 2000-12-20 08:06 PM


I'm also sorry to hear that you've lost a friend. Music is such a great release, isn't it? I play the piano, and I know there's nothing like it. Thanks for sharing.

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-12-20 11:59 PM


Glad to see you were inspired and picked up that old guitar. I'm still playing my heart out and learning more and more each day. Hope to see you at the MTV awards when i win all my stuff!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
5 posted 2000-12-21 12:08 PM


Lakewalker~ im ok, ill be ok.
Lovebug~i live on my music. i tried piano once,lol.
Javier~ i was insipired. thank u.
Regina

Lani_DarkOne
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 152
UK
6 posted 2000-12-21 01:24 PM


sorry about your friend..
I know how it's like to play a guitar after a break..and you've shown it excelently in your poem..great stuff..

"..don't get sentimental
It always..ends up drivel" - Let Down, Radiohead

Alwye
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In the space between moments
7 posted 2000-12-21 10:13 PM


I too play guitar..it's an incredible release, isn't it?  I'm sorry to hear about your friend also, but it's good to know you have some way to get your feelings out.  

*Krista Knutson*

"One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar."
Helen Keller


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