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luvnkris
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0 posted 2000-12-19 09:57 PM



I miss you my doggy pal

It’s been 4 months now that you’ve been gone
And still I can’t grasp it’s the truth
What once was there all the time
Is now just a memory

Sanai, I still miss you like the day I lost you
I still love you like the day I found you
My heart, it feels empty because you are not here
Gone in one second that car that road
It flashes through my head again and again

My best friend, my lil hunny, my doggy!
I know for forever I’ll be missing you as much
But in silent tribute, I wish for your touch
All I ask is a chance to say bye
To thankyou for always being there after school

When it felt like the world abandoned me you were there
Jumping on my lap and giving a reassuring lick
Letting me know that you still did care
Sanai, although your gone now
A part of you is still here in my heart
Thankyou my doggy pal.


* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-12-19 10:38 PM


You got my tears going Luvnkris ... I am so very sorry for your loss. I've had a few furry best friends in my lifetime and I do understand all too well this sadness. They truly do become family, and their loss is felt in such a very special way. If you ever need to talk, I'm only an e-mail away.  Hugs to you in this difficult time ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 12-19-2000).]

Hallie_Angel
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2 posted 2000-12-20 07:14 AM


May the souls of the faithfully departed in the mercy of God rest in peace. It is unimaginable to loose a loved one especially if he was your best friend. Sorry for your loss!!!


                                   Catherine!

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3 posted 2000-12-20 03:26 PM


This is such a sad piece. It always hurts to lose a pet. They are just as close to you as any human friend, and they understand things that people never will. This is a beautiful tribute. Best of luck!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
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4 posted 2000-12-20 04:59 PM


Great poem for your dog, pets are such wonderful things!  This was a good poem, but I'm sorry you had to lose your doggy.

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Ina
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5 posted 2000-12-20 08:08 PM


great tribute to your dog Sanai. Even they can sometimes seem like a pain our pets are our friends. im sorry
Regina

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6 posted 2000-12-20 11:49 PM


This was great......sorry about the dog, i know how it is.



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7 posted 2000-12-21 02:24 PM


Ohhhhh puppy's are one of the most important things in the world if you own one! My dog is a part of our family, the loss would be very large. I'm sorry this has happened to you, this was a sweet tribute.  
xoxo
Jenn

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8 posted 2000-12-22 11:55 AM


Awww this is such a beautiful tribute to you puppy pal!! I looooooove dogs and i know exactly what its like to loose one..they become a part of your family and you love the so dearly..im so sorry that it had to happen to you..this was such a sweet poem!
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