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Those Words... |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Remember that awful day, When i spoke to you those words? The tears trickled down my face, Why couldnt i learn? I told you i loved you, And instantly wished it taken away. I made one of my biggest mistakes ever, That painful day. I love you but i should not, For its me who will be in pain. I didnt know what i was doing, Your love is all i wish to gain. So i said those words to you, The most heart felt words ever to slip my tongue. But if it wasnt for my feelings, My sadness would never have begun. So i'm sorry i told you, Now im in a vulnerable state. You know how i feel, You know now nothing can take your place. I cant trust you with my heart, It's too valuable to break. But by saying those three words, I will get punished for my mistake |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
Great peom, it is a tough situation that we can all relate to good luck and keep up the good work! ~*Pixie*~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey babe~ WEll here comes my advice  you should NEVER be "punished" for saying those words, ever. You cant help nor stop what you feel. Atleast you got your feelings out in the open, dont let yourself feel vulnerable. This is all about you and what you want to happen. You control your life, dont let someone else moderate it. do what u want to do, say what u want to say, and feel what you wanna feel. and dont let anyone stand in your way or intimidate you. you dont have to feel vulnerable...go out and go shopping or something, make yourself feel good. its allowed ALRIGHT LOL can we say rambling!! But theres my speech Have a great day babe! LOL**Kiley ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was a great poem, and I hope everything works out like its supposed to. Repeat to everything DancinQueen said. ~Carly |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thanks everyone for your replies!! This whole thing with this guy has been really tough but things are getting a lil better and thanks for all of your advice... Kiley--I never talk to you n e more gurl!! I gotta update you...thanx for the advice  muahz Thanx everyone!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem is really good and ditto to everyone else "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
this was so sad, you know i surely hope that things get ok with you and this situation. Good luck!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Those three little words, so short yet can cause soo much heartache! I sometimes wish they nevere existed! Great Poem!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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