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2 Similar Poems. Forgotten and Lost and Found
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2 Similar Poems. Forgotten and Lost and Found |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI 
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---Forgotten--- Fingers much too frozen; Can't remember how to write. Found within the closet are real mosters of the night. Pupils much too widened; Can't remember how to see. Lost within the daydreams are my laughter and my glee. ---Lost and Found--- Lost in fake bright streamers And troubled by their lies. Lost within false wonders Fallen under bleeding skies. Found in frozen gutters Loved by Christmas lights. Found underneath the covers Fearing silver eyes at night. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Los dos eran bien trippy.....quiero que te sepa que te quiero con todo de mi corazon y sus poemas son hermozas.....tienes una talento especial....sigue asi....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Fingers much too frozen; Can't remember how to write. Found within the closet are real mosters of the night. Pupils much too widened; Can't remember how to see. Lost within the daydreams are my laughter and my glee." These may be two short poems, but you say so much with these few words. I especally love the quoted poem above. You are a very talented poet. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Awwwww......Dopey you... grrrrrrrrrr......lol TRANSLATE OR ILL CRY!!!!! Thanks a bunchies, Love Bug  ~Carly |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Creo que en estos poemas estoy de acuerdo con Dopey, tienes un gran talento y tus poemas son increibles. Te quiero mucho y puedes contar conmigo siempre. Tu amigo, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Je crois que je suis d'accord avec Dopey dans ces poemes, tu as un grand talent et tes poemes son incroyables. Je t'aime beaucoup et je suis avec toi toujours. Ton ami, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
I think that I'll agree with Dopey on these poems, you are very talented and your poems are amazing. I love you very much and you can count on me always. Your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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ZAOfreak Junior Member
since 2000-11-08
Posts 22CA, USA |
These poems are really rad! They are so short, but so deep in their meaning. I fall into writing like this. Deep. Great. Can't wait, to read some more! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
These are exellent poems. Thank you for sharing them IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Haha, I love your translate plea Anyway, great job on the poems, I think they're really good. keep them coming  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Lol, thanks Caz. And thanks to you guys for replying. ~Carly |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
Its so deep. Short but full of meanings. Great read. apsara |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i see i've missed a lot by not reading your poems  my bad...actually, my loss you and peanogrl83 have this talent in writing. Your words expressed in such wonders. i bow infront of you out of respect to your talent I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Ajdjs kjf ioereoi kjnkls lkjoie ll oiroe kllkkjlksl ijeoilk ~xcv "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Translation: I thought these were superb and great job! ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
LOL thanks you guys ~Carly |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
It takes so much talent to express how your feeling in such few words...its a talent that i do not posses but u do and your very lucky! I think your a great poet and these 2 poems prove it along with all the rest...great read |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I'm not even gonna try replying in French. I'm good, but not that good. Besides, then I'd have to translate... Anyway, awesome poems! I especially like the last one... Keep it up. ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Virgil Junior Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 43Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Fantastic. Simply fantastic. "By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee." |
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