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cant get you out of my mind
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cant get you out of my mind |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
We met We danced. We kissed. But it wasn't ment to be cause you were scarred and i was to trusting. Our numbers were given but you never called. Did you even remember me or were you to drunk. Why did our paths cross? Was is so a month or so after i could still be thinking about you and feel hurt. I know it was only for a few hours so why do i still miss you. |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
You miss him because he made an impact on your life! I know how you are feeling - I get like this at times, I often can't get people off my mind! But we all have to remember that times are tough! We have to be patient and something will come our way! Remember that good things come to those who wait! Don't just chase the only guy in your life - we must look at them and ask ourselves if this is what you want! And make sure it is because getting hurt is often too much to bare! Trust me - I have been there - I thought it was something I wanted - but instead I could have had something that was a LOT better and nicer - but couldn't because I was too blind to see!! Hope all works well for you!! Love Melz! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Nice poem. Great job expressing your thaoughts. I think if you have his number still you just call him and ask him what's up. Who knows he could be kicking himself for not calling you too. Anyway, good luck to ya IsGona< !signature--> "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 12-15-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great!!!! Sad situation though....sorry about that.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
this was so sad! people can be so cruel. hang in there, it'll be ok  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you expressed yourself well here, the poem tells your feelings well. "Remember that good things come to those who wait!" I think that that is good advice that Melster shared, and as IsGona added, maybe he was waiting for you to call. Anyway, nice job on the poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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