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sherm
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since 2000-07-21
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Evansville,IN

0 posted 2000-12-13 11:19 PM


this isnt much of a poem   its more like some short lyrics for one of those minute long punk songs that uses the same chords throught out the song   i was just listening to some punk music and it came out just for fun    so i thought id post it


what am i
where do i belong
where do i fit in

iv got the highest grade in calculus
im on the football team
and i love punk rock
i dont get it

what am i
where do i belong
where do i fit in

WHO CARES!




Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not

© Copyright 2000 Geoff A. Anderson - All Rights Reserved
sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
1 posted 2000-12-14 12:14 PM


That was really cool! Sometimes it's hard to know where you fit in. But when you find the group you are comfortable with, the ones who don't care what kind of grades you make, or don't care what sports you play, or don't care what kind of music you listen to, the one's that just want you to be yourself because if you are always trying to be someone else they can neer really get to know you, then stick with them because they will be true friends to you.
Well sorry for rambling!! Great job, keep writing!!

Luv,
   ~*~Sweetstuff~*~


~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~

Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-12-14 04:19 PM


I like this, it's a great statement, who cares.  nice job

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Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2000-12-14 08:22 PM


This was good hehe. I liked the ending

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


peanogrl83
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4 posted 2000-12-15 12:57 PM


Yeah! This would make a wicked nifty punk song! lol. Nice topic. As for fitting in? Ehhh, screw it.  I've decided I'll never fit in, and it's just a direct result of individuality. As such, it's fine w/ me. :.) Nice job, though! :.)

Vreni

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5 posted 2000-12-16 02:50 PM



  This was kickin! I loved it.
  ~Carly

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