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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
"Memories" Playing basketball with a friend Pillow fights on the bed A hot day in the sun Going swimming, spashing, having fun The high school years have begun A million times my phone must have rung Church, zoos, parks, and broken hearts Having fun at Mrytle Beach Pleasure-filled times at the sea Chasing the boys as a little girl around the tree Smiling, laughing, sad and happy It's summer, helping mother in the garden I have memories of dinner and the bell ringing Memories of you and me on the boat The water sometimes warm, some cold Sipping ice-teas or enjoying the warmth Of the fire and hot choclate Trips to Ohio, Orlando, and Kerr lake and the condo Memories of long ago... Santa and the Christmas tree The falling snow looked pretty Halloween, Easter's Jelly beans The rough exciting years as a teen ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Yep, being a teen is rough and exciting...for the most part anyway. Exellent work here, it's always nice to look back on those memories, isn't it? *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Teenage years are rough, as I am experiencing them now. But they also have there wonderfull moments...as you have expressed in this poem. Great poem, keep writing! Luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great memories and nice job on the poem  !"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Exelent job. When it's all said and done these are the greatest times of our lives. Nice poem IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. A wonderful, MEMORABLE read. Hope to see more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Alwye: Thanks, I agree yes it is.  Sweetstuff101: Thanks, Good Luck with life as a teen right now also. I like your quote. LakeWalker: Thanks. ISgona: Thanks, that it true. Dopey_Dope: Thanks, I also look forward to reading your poetry. Your 1st quote is cool I think. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sweetie! this is just SO cute! i loved this one. Thank you for bringing back some memories that are very special to me. Love ya bunches. ~me~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
great description of your life as a teen, beautiful words jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Amy: Thanks. Im glad I brought some happy memories back for you. Those were/are some nice times arn't they?! jeremydraul: Thank You. Life as a teen has its up and downs and these the ups of mine so far. Look forward to reading your work. Take care. ~Lisa~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this poem is what i needed to read tonight. Seldom does a poem make you really go back to not only one moment in your past but thru your whole past. tahnks for the read by the way, life, no matter what is not easy I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Acire: Glad you liked the poem. Your quote however made me sad. Hope to read some of your work soon. Take care. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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