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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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reply?! A view on life through a mourners eye: Aren't we suppose too look at life through rose tinted glasses? If that is so, why is the world I see dull, lifless, black and white. The pain you caused will last longer than the love you showed me, cursing obsceneties to the sky, I no longer believe in G-d, just a faceless myth He picks and chooses who lives and who dies, all though he can never choose who fights against him He took away a friend, who was suppose to see the life through rose tinted glasses! Green as sky, and black as the heart is what you are I never asked for a favour so when I needed one, you ignored me a view of life through a mourner's eye is not special, is not happy and is not forgiving a view of life through a mourner's eye is sad,and angry He is gone and it is all your fault! I am gone and it is all your fault! You schould say your sorry, but how soon I forget you are a faceless myth! so leave me be I do not care for your laws or morals for a view in a mourner's eye is not a pleasent forgiving one. Regina Ok,wow, very angry poem. I do not mean in any way that ppl who believe in G-d r silly. I just dont believe in him anymore. |
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Minister of Dissonance Junior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 20 |
death need not give rise to anger, nor need pain strip one of faith *mourn* the great dissonant one |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I'm going to have to completely agree with Minister. People die and that's just the way it is.........Some day I will die ya know? I surely hope that my death doesn't cause one to lose faith in God. That's the last thing i'd ever want. Great poem though, expression at its best!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
well, well i understant what u are saying and I know that everyone dies...but not so young Regina |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I'm going to agree with the others on this one. I see what your point is but I do not agree with it. Great job expressing your views with the poem though! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Ina: This poem brought back feelings I used to have towards God after my mom passed away when I was 12. Im 19 now and it still chokes my up sometimes. I didnt want to believe it was true and couldnt understand how God could take her away when me and my family loved and needed her. She was only 47. Im sorry to hear you've lost faith but mabye one day you will get it back (I have). Some people may not agree with you on this topic but I feel its your right to your opionion. Good luck finding the sun hidding behind those huge ugly clouds! Take care. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
thank u but my faith in g-d is not their, I have stopped celebrating the jewish religon. I decided that what "he" did was un fair... Regina |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Ina - I am not going to agree or disagree with you here, what you all say here is correct, we all die some day. Other peole dying is harder on us though! My dad died when I was 2 years old and my sister was not quite born yet, my mum was 7 months pregnant. We all have our day to go, unfortunatly the ones we love are quite often taken too soon!! I hope that your happiness is returned to you soon! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
INA, ya know sweetie I too have been placed in a situation where I doubted my faith in the heavenly one... The heavenly one works in mysterious ways and though we question his actions day 2 day and we may never understand his why's and when's one thing I am sure of is that your friend would not want you to consume your heart and live your days of life ahead bittersweet... Remember hun, the spirit of your friend is with you always... Hugs2U... this is a touching write  coco |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey, this is a very sad and very angry poem. I know how this feels, to a certain point. I won't critize you for not believing, people have a right to believe in whatever they want to. But I will tell you that eventually, things get better. Smile and keep your chin up Bel |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Ina: Alright thats fine. You have the right to believe that.Also your welcome anyway. Take care. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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