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Another Day |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Sometimes difficult to see the silver lining, surrounding the neverending clouds of unhappiness. Almost impossible to wake up and look forward to the chaos, that ends up being just another day. Wait another minute, day, week, or month, soon you'll see this joy was worth the delays. How hard to be patient, when all you ever wanted is just out of reach. Another day to wait, another handful of impatience. Smile, and face your 'holding pattern', one day all will be better, all can be well. Do your time, wait, and pay your debts, all you've waited for, will soon come to you. * about waiting for something you need more than anything.... having to be stuck in a holding pattern of somewhat annoying length.  |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Ooooh! I loved it. It is very very hard to wait for something you want, I know. Great job explaining this!!! ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you told of this waiting very well. I like this one, great job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
ahh the future sometimes looks so bright but it seems we never stop just looking at it. Why can't the future ever be the present. Great poem. Keep up the good work IsGona< !signature--> "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 12-12-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great! You told us of this annoying wait very well. Hope to see more of you!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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