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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Love, NO, maybe, stop, help, no, okay, yes, I can't, I won't, I will, I didn't, I did, I wish I hadn't, HELP!!! Don't ask me what that's about, I'm confused myself but it just came out, oh well!  |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I really liked the style, it was very different and I love crazy things. Way to get that outta your system. ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I got something out of this, and I like how it's done "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Cool. Sweet. (Sweetness as Jes and Teresa would say!) N e ways, bye girl! I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Thanks yall!!! Catherine!!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was great. The style is completely odd and odd things are quite welcomed here. Good job in a spicy read!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I love to see a new style of writting. I think this poem has a sense of panic or urgency to it. It's quite interesting. Thanks for sharing IsGona |
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Minister of Dissonance Junior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 20 |
didn't care much for the format personally, perhaps a good performance piece, certainly with some veiled personal meaning -- would like to see a filled out explanatory version of this piece... *shatter* the great dissonant one |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
different is good, meaning is better, good work jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
~*Bump (because I love this, and Cat, don worry, I brought the cds)*~ I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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