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The Mind And The Heart
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The Mind And The Heart |
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Al Nany Junior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 16 |
The Mind And The Heart Have patience; give it space. I’m going mad; I can wait no more. Do not hate or blame; love, and understand. I have, I am, but why always me? Be noble; love like no one was able to. I try but I can no longer! This pain is much too great to bear. Do not cry! You will stay strong! I don’t care! I know nothing now! Go on! Forget her! You don’t need her! I know! But I just can’t help it! It’s not that easy… You must try. It is the only way to freedom. But what if… what if… what if… You are a fool, she is laughing at your suffering. You deserve no pity! Leave me be… Like her, you will never see. I need her; I love her; I miss her! Everyday, I can taste the sweetness of the past, It’s torture! It’s pain! It is not my will! I don’t want to be like this! I am screaming at the top of my lungs, but no sound. I am tearing the thoughts of the mind, but no use. I do not believe the truth; I refuse to see. I am bleeding, and the blood turns so cold, so soon. I hate, I hate, I hate. I love… Sigh I will overcome my unbelief. I will have faith. One day, on the closing stages, We will find each other. We will. I believe in us. October 17, 2000 01:28 AM Personal Site: www.truethoughts.net ICQ:2477756 AIM:[url=aim:addbuddy?screenname=WPALNANYA&groupname=Al Nany]wp A |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Powerfully expressed, and with such conviction. I enjoyed the conversational aspect in this piece ... nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Wow, this was so powerful, and well-written.. it makes you feel all the emotion. You are very talented!! Keep up the great work... wow. Take care, Sarah< !signature--> love is friendship set on fire... now, if only it were free to burn... [This message has been edited by silvrduck (edited 12-11-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, this one was told with such real emotion, great job! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Cripes you've got talent. I'm amazed. Super job.... ~Carly |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job on this one. The power within it is chair knocking.....yea i fell off my chair. So hehe......great job and keep posting.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Baby Gansta Junior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 24 |
A well written piece, you could really feel the emotion, well done Al. |
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