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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-12-09 01:10 PM


I’ll be 18 in 3 days
And all I want
Is for everyone
To forget about me
Just like every
Valentine’s day
I’ve endured.
Its just another
Day of the year.
Just that its
12-13 doesn’t
Mean a thing.
Just another day
To live thru.
I wanna scream,
I wanna shout
I’ll be 18…
But all I want
Is to spend it
With Justin.




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1 posted 2000-12-09 02:17 PM


I think that since it's your b-day you do whatever you want. But anyway good poem expression wise. You had to say something and you said it bluntly. Hope to see more!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-12-09 02:29 PM


I like the way this is written, it's very strong.  nice job of writing!

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Tamma
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3 posted 2000-12-10 12:22 PM


Yea...And my parents decided they were gonna throw a party, and I *just* found out about it this morning when I got home...


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Erin
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4 posted 2000-12-11 01:27 AM


HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY TAMMA!!!!!!!You told us in a really creative way...

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

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5 posted 2000-12-12 06:09 PM


HAPPY 18th BRITHDAY TAMMA!!!

hmmmm...u look more like 12 in your pic --- no offense intended  


I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Tamma
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6 posted 2000-12-12 06:54 PM


none taken acire, i hear that alot  Thanx!!

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7 posted 2000-12-12 07:06 PM


I hope your birthday is something special for you...its your day to shine hun...you should do what ever you want and have fun and just forget about the rest of the world for a day...hope you enjoy it!!
Melster
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8 posted 2000-12-13 04:36 AM


18 huh!!  Well my 18th was boring!  I don't know what the whole jizzy jazz about being 18 is!!  It is another day in your life - the only thing is now you are really responsible for yourself and where's the fun there?  none!  oh - and you get to vote for politicians who generally have no idea anyway!!  As for drinking well generally we have all done it before 18 anyway so what's the big deal?  It's no fun when it's legal!!

Have a great day!

Melz!!

Caz
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9 posted 2000-12-13 08:24 PM


  HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!  
I hope you have a great day with Justin and your friends! Good luck and I hope you best of lucks with everything in your life.  
Your friend
Caz


It's been raining since you left me.

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