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~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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since 2000-11-04
Posts 83
Fitchburg Ma Usa

0 posted 2000-12-09 11:52 AM


I wonder what happen to our love
I guess it went down with the rain
I wish it'd come back

My heart is empty
you no longer care for me
I still care for you

All the memories have passed
there not comming back either
they'll stay in our hearts

What was I when I was yours
a friend who played with
or a girlfriend who you loved?

I see you and want to cry
I ignore you and don't talk
I think of you differently

You want me back in your life
more than a friend
back as a girlfriend

Do I trust you?
I'll get hurt again
I'd like to be friends

When I tell you
I want to be your friend
you frown and act nice

Love is hitting me again
you can't face it that someone else likes me
you want me but I don't want you

Maybe when this life comes to a end
we will be lovers again
we will be happy again

I'm always your friend
I may not talk to you
but I still care

I think could this be
lost love or not..

~Min~



A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time



© Copyright 2000 Minna Talviharju - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
1 posted 2000-12-09 01:56 PM


"I wonder what happen to our love
I guess it went down with the rain
I wish it'd come back"

I think you did a great job of telling your emotions here, the poem is very good   

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2000-12-09 02:31 PM


This poem expressed your emotions well. I hope that luck flies your way!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


QTpieOmy
Junior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 11
Illinois
3 posted 2000-12-11 04:15 PM


This was a great poem, sorry it took me so long to reply... You told me to read your version of "Lost Love" after you read mine. Im glad you posted it! Keep writing, you've got talent!

Love Always,
Tara

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