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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
I wonder what your doing up in heaven It’s almost December 23 I don’t like this month so many memories So many everything I wonder why GOD took you It wasn’t fair. My one memory of you is When you’d go “Hi Princess” You’d laugh at me because I’d get so hyper after breakfast Just to let you know I’m doing better in life I may get mad at people but they talk to me I can walk better now I’m going skiing I’m sure you’ll be able to hear me. I hear you every morning saying GOODMORNING MINNA! I just smile when I go get my breakfast I can feel you laughing at me I remember you and I doing everything and when we burnt the grill cheese you and I were laughing People now say you didn’t laugh as much but you did laugh that one day, I need you the most now I’m sure the family does too Lucy misses you she has no one to sleep with I still love you and I’ll always miss you Merry Christmas Dad! Love always ~*~Minna~*~ A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Hi! Great poem.. I am so sorry for your loss, and I will pray for you and your family to give you strength through this month. Very very good poem.. It was a great read.. really sad, but a great read! Keep up the good work. *Jennifer |
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Dazed_and_Confused Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 15 |
Very heartwarming poem. Its a very wonderfull poem for your dad. Its awsome!    |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Hyia thanks for the replys. If you'd like you two can email me.. Bye ~Min~  A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You have some lovely and tender memories of your dad here Mina ... hugs to you in these difficult times ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this poem was touching. A great read.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Kit- My mom said I need to get this on the web, you know how these sometimes say "publish your poem" how do I do that. I also remember that when he died I said to the family he's my angel now. When I walk I feel my angel sitting on my shoulder telling me "your doing a good job" I see him in dreams and everywhere I go. When I can't face the day he's there to help me. Rip Mikko Talviharju 2-21-43 to 12-23-99 we miss you dad! ~Min~ A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I hope that your good memories help you through the month, good job on the poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
I can't go to parties because I miss him, I can't eat because I miss him. All I can do is cry and wonder what he's doing, I can only drink. I want him back so bad, I was his little girl he cared about me so much. I love him so much and I hope he see's that, I want to show him that I'm not doing so well and that I need his help. ~Min~  A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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