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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
Bad dreams come visit, Chasing sleep away. My heart beating faster, Relizing I'm awake. It is 2 in the morning, Or is it the middle of the night? I look over towards you, And know everthing's all right. You pull me closer, And hold me in your arms. Kiss my forehead gently, As you keep me safe from harm. Sleep comes easy now, The monsters no longer here. So I can rest easily, Just knowing that you're near. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really like the flow and feeling of this one, great job! I forgot to mention that I'm pretty bad with titles but hopefully some other people will help you out with suggestions if you want them  < !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 12-08-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey i really think you have tons upon tons of talent here. The flow and content witin this poem are amazing. I liked the message too, so sweet. Keep posting!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Dazed_and_Confused Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 15 |
I love it! Don't you hate it when you dream of bad dreams? well so do i. But this poem is Awsome! My favortie part is "kiss my forehead gently" Keep on writin'! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
 sigh dont you love that feeling?? That sense of security and love?? I think its one of the best feelings ever...you are so lucky to have someone like that who can make you feel that way in your life Great poem! |
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